Could I get some feedback please?

[RIP Carlyle Rausgeber]

I'm no genius prodigy, or excellant writer. But I think I'm pretty damn good. But that being said, I have a grossly inflated opinion of my writing skill, and I'm an opinated prick. I was wondering if there's anything I could personally do as a writer on this site to improve my prose? Is there anything I do that annoys you? Just say the word. I want there to be some fair criticism of myself so I can improve.

 

[Lief]

I've never actually written with you, ever... However...

omg every time I see the avatar of this account I die a little inside from cuteness overload.

It is so adorable

That is all... 10/10

[member="Carlyle Rausgeber"]

 

[RIP Carlyle Rausgeber]

[member="Mysa Snowstrider"] truly, there is nothing cuter than watching a member of the Waffen SS rock backwards and forwards with a delirious grin. I give credit to [member="Natasi Fortan"] for finding it. When I joined this site, and the First Order, she found this for me. She's one of the greatest people on here, and I owe her heaps.

 

[Lief]

[member="Carlyle Rausgeber"]

Perhaps one day we could find cause to write. It would put a smile on my face every time I got a reply!

 

[Ryan]

[member="Carlyle Rausgeber"] Haven't rped with you yet. But you are in my good books. NFU FOREVER!!! *FIST PUMPS*

 

[RIP Carlyle Rausgeber]

I hope to one day meet you soon Captain [member="Matthias Hull"] ,perhaps we will on the battlefield, sealing our fates for eternity.

 

[Ryan]

[member="Carlyle Rausgeber"] look forward to the day!