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Cortosis Saberstaff (pending approval)

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Intent: K'sara's Personal Lightsaber, will go to her heir when she has one.

Manufacturer: K'sara Korr

Model: Lightsaber Staff Hilt

Affiliation: Saber Trained Force Users (Sith and Jedi alike)

Modularity: Weapon components can be swapped. A non force user would have a harder time dismantling the lightsaber as it is purposely fastened tightly and Force sealed. Easy to interchange? Depending on Sensitivity.

Production: Unique

Materials: Cortosis weave, Tungstoid, Polyfibe, Color Crystal: Silver, Advanced Dragite Lense(x2), Support Crystals: Sapith, Meditation Crystal, plasteel, Telgorn Jolt Cell Mark I, Phobium emitter

Description:The metallic ends and the connective ribbing of the staff hilt are made out of Tungstoid, a metal used to make blast doors during the Galactic Civil War. Polyfibe and cortosis weave wrap around the ribbing on the staff and are meant to be a strong resistance for lightsaber dueling. While the hilt has that invulnerability to the plasma blades in some spots, it still has the ability to become defunct if another lightsaber hits the special clear plasteel that makes up the rest of the casing. The lenses came from an old lightsaber hilt that she got from Darth Ferus, and the gems were on her person when she was thawed out, gifts from her slain Jedi master.
 
[member="Feral Sapith (K'sara)"]

Hello and welcome to the Factory. I am Ordo your freindly neighborhood Mando and I'll be reviewing your submission. First I'd like to tell you that my goal in the factory is to help you make the item you desire while maintaining a fairness of play that will help you avoid problems during PvP combat.

As for my initial review.

First: you don't need to put pending approval in your title. As factory volunteers we will add a "Pending Approval" stamp when we have reviewed and given our judgement. The stamp is light green, rectangular, very stylish you'll love it.

Second: Due to the fairness of play that I mentioned in my introductory statement as being our goal, the board owner, a tireless gentleman I assure you, and factory administration added a restricted materials list to the factory that I am required to enforce. Cortosis is of course on this list. Below is the cortosis requirements for factory submissions.

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Cortosis (( Objective : Perform a mining operation, a raid, an excavation, or steal to obtain cortosis ore from any of the following planets: Apatros, Obredaan, Katanos VII, Duro, Bal’demnic, Mnencheiasus, Gallos or Bespin –OR—suffer a devastating defeat at the hands of a Force User Character written by another writer. ))


Here is the link for the rest of the restricted and banned items. http://starwarsrp.net/topic/14386-banned-restricted-items-list/

So I will have to ask that you go ahead and fulfill the cortosis requirement, link the thread here, and then we can finish up this submission and get it approved for you.

Thanks in advance for your hard work and adherence to the factory rules

-Ordo
 
[member="Ordo"]

I was instructed in a few of the faults in my weapon design, and made a new thread to legitimize my weapon where there wouldn't be any problems. Thank you for letting me know how the approval process works firsthand and I hope all is well. If you will please remove this thread, and look to the update.

Once again, thank you
 

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