Connor Harrison: Cumberfied

[Connor Harrison]

Hi all.

Connor Harrison is my favourite of all characters created. He started off undefined, but came back "rebooted" as the man I wanted him to be.

I've tried to take him on a journey that will continue now after the Event but before I do start his next chapter I would love to have feedback on him. What does or doesn't work? How do you find writing with him? Is the character too flat?

Good, bad, in the middle? I don't mind. All feedback will be greatly appreciated so I can keep trying to make him the best I can as a valued character in the Chaos world.

Thanks.

 

[Aithne Charr]

[member="Connor Harrison"]

You are by far one of the most fun Jedi i have had the pleasure of Roleplaying with as i believe you best deal with the whole struggle between dark and light and keeping your place as it is. Further you are a very well written character and i have had the pleasure of following your character's story from back when the taung invaded your body to now. Keep it up.

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member="Solan Charr"] Thank you so much, that means a great deal. I will continue to try do him justice!

 

[Corvus Raaf]

I like you just the way you are.

 

[Keira Priest]

Although I've only met the character in two threads, one of them still in-progress, I can say that Connor is an interesting and very well-written character. His personality is very distinct, and details the conflict between light and dark and the way it would have an effect on someone's own character very well. I think one of the most interesting things to read about him is that fight within himself, because it's detailed very well. So far I've just seen two sides to the character, but I hope to see more in the future. Keep it up, because you're doing amazing.

And the awesome playby doesn't hurt either.

[member="Connor Harrison"]

 

[Nima Tann]

Enough said

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member="Corvus Raaf"] Thank you Corvy.

[member="Keira Ticon"] Thank you so much, I do try my best to detail his inner struggle. I appreciate your words.

[member="Nima Tann"] Now that doesn't help my ego. Thank you very much but I know he's not perfect!

 

[Darth Ren Malgus]

Let me think about this. Hmm.

I like when you stay true to what you see for him. Reacting in ways he should rather than in ways you think others want to see him react.

I like that at times we get to see his sense of humor.

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member="Serena Bouie"] Thank you - I always try to let HIM act and speak, regardless of what I want. Natural actions are always best I feel.

 

[Hailyn]

Not enough cowbell dark side.

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member=Silara] No comment at this present time.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?list=PL8C374E2AEE298FE8&v=UfD9fWt8hrQ

 

[Jaxton Ravos]

My real name is Connor. I find your character to be very annoying because of this one fact. No, it's not a fair assessment, and it has nothing to do with you or your character or your writing, but that's my honest opinion.

I'm sorry.

 

[Connor Harrison]

[member="Jaxton Ravos"] I do apologise for using your name...that critique will be the hardest one to live with now and may turn Connor to the ale.