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Command Post Alpha

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Jake Haxedros

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Name: Command Post Alpha
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Classification: Naval Station
Location: Geonosis, Hidden in the Desert Range
Affiliation: CIS

Population: 200
Defenses:
  • [1] Planetary Shield Generator
  • [1] Deflector Shield
  • [2] Anti-Orbital Cannon
  • [5] Anti-Aircraft Guns
  • [5] Anti-Infantry Turrets
  • [50] CIS Guards (Organic)
  • [300] B1 Battle Droids
  • [30] Specialised Droids
Points of Interest:
  • Hangers
  • Planetary Shield Generator
  • Command Fort
  • Bunker
Description:
The site itself is small, and densley packed, only containing a few small facilities. The Command Fort takes up most of the space, and is manned by about 100 personnel, who make sure everything is running smoothly. There is also a small underground bunker area, in case of an attack, where important personnel can be kept safe in the event of an attack. The Planetary Shield Generator is the core of the facility, and is surrounded by the other areas. There are a few guards stationed there, but the generator is mostly droid-controlled. There is also a few small hangars where shuttle's and small spacecraft are stored, in order to receive and transfer supplies and personnel. The whole facility is surrounded by a small wall, manned with guard towers, and droid emplacements, in order to repel ground attacks. The Anti-Aircraft guns are the latest addition to the facility, giving it a much more rounded protection.

History: Geonosis has been the target of many wars and conquests over the years, but now, the CIS have made it their capital, and they plan to defend it. A Top Secret Project was started, creating this command post in the far off desert ranges. Radiation warnings were given to the area, to ward off intruders, and construction proceeded slowly, as few people could be trusted to work on the project. Finally though, the Command Post was complete, and a battlion of droids sen to defend it. The site was revealed, and the shield generators were brought online, bringing some small amount of peace to a battle-torn world.

Intent: To provide a defence outpost for the CIS, in order t protect their capital.

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This submission is well rounded overall, very simplistic but detailed. There's just a few things:


  • Name: Fort Abenaki
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    I'm not sure whether this is a mistake or purposeful, but there already is an approved fort submitted by the name Fort Abenaki under the Commonwealth. Please address this.
  • Points of Interest: You list "Fort" under the points of interest. Is there another fort in the area? These points of interest should come from within your fort not.
  • Description: What I see here is a paragraph that belongs under the history tab. In the description you should discuss the internal layout of the fort.
  • Defenses: I'm going to need an estimated number of how many active soldiers and droids defend this at any time.
    Development Thread: Depending on the troop count of course were looking at about ten posts of development.
 
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