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Club Frenzee

Corporation Name: Club Frenzee
Owner: Cryax Bane
Club Manager: Dakita Calfur
Headquarters: Club Frenzee on Antecedent, 4th Floor Office
Locations: Club Frenzee on Antecedent

Operations: Nightclub
Rationale: After his employee Dakita Calfur hosted a party at Club Frenzy on Zeltros, Cryax Bane, President of the Red Ravens, saw just how popular the event was and it gave him an idea. To open a similar Club in the location of the Dragon Palace Casino. Bane is the primary owner of the club and Dakita Calfur is the Club Manager who has a small stake in the company and runs the day-to-day operations. Bane was able to open the club with a financial loan based on the Dragon Palace Casino's good credit standing.

Tier 1

Description:

Club Frenzee on Antecedent

Club Frenzee is located at Ground Zero on Antecedent. It has four floor of decadence to get lost in. It contains five full-service bars that serve an array of drinks, including specialty cocktails created by renowned galaxy mixologists. There are stairs and see-through elevators on both sides of the buildings for guests to get around. And of course, exits that are up to fire safety codes.

Floor-by-floor description:

1st Floor: There is a main bar in the front and a huge dance floor in the back that hosts all types of themed parties. The dance floor has an immense disco ball that hangs over patrons like a chandelier and stages and cages for go-go dancers. There is a high-tech sound system, and a 40-foot video wall that backs the DJ booth.

2nd Floor: Burlesque shows and circus acts. Indoor pyrotechnics, acrobatics - that type of stuff

3rd Floor: Karaoke Bar

4th Floor: VIP Lounge, including fully heated, pink hot tub. This is also where the Office of of Pink Party Productions is located.

The nighclub does business in a variety of ways. Sales of drink, food and premium alcohol keeps the lights on. The clubs can also be rented out to anyone who wants to host a theme party. Club Frenzee also books bands and hosts celebrity parties and in this situations they either sell tickets or charge a cover fee. There are escorts who work on all floors of Club Frenzee and the escorts work for tips. Club Frenzee gets a small percentage of those tips. Finally there is an expensive fee to get into the VIP Lounge of the club because: What happens the VIP Lounge of Club Frenzy, stays in the VIP Lounge of Club Frenzy!

Subsidiaries: None so far
 
Dakita Calfur said:
Corporation Name: Pink Party Productions, LLC
If this is the name of the corporation, please put it in the title.
  • Tier I corporations do not have locations outside of their home planet. They generally don't have multiple locations at all.
  • Please either remove the images entirely or include them via hyperlink.
  • Given all the listed shows, performers, and technology at work in these clubs, this is totally beyond the scope of an independent Tier I or II company. This would need to be a subsidiary of at least a Tier III, and a successful one at that.
Please tag me when the edits have been made.
 
[member="Dakita Calfur"]

[member="Gerion Ardik"]

Thank you for your consideration and time.

The following edits have been made upon your suggestion:

1. Changed the title of the Corporation Name. Can't edit it in the actual Title Post though.
2. Reduced the number of floors
3. Has only one location now
4. Located in and associated with the Dragon Palace Casino which is owned by Cryax Bane, President of the Red Ravens.
(was formerly Lysle of the Hydian Way who is now deceased)
5. No longer a Franchise. It's a standalone club now.
6. Removed images

Please include your edits in separate posts in the future. I've removed it from your submission and put it in a spoiler here just for keeping record. As for editing the title, anyone can do that if they enter a post to edit it and then hit the "use full editor" button.

In any event, this is approved.
 

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