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Approved Tech Clan Meran Combat Engineer armor

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Image Source: http://hebime.deviantart.com/art/New-Conglomerate-female-engineer-344348819
Intent: To create a basic clan armor for the Meran Combat Mechanics and Engineeres.
Development Thread: Litle something extra
Manufacturer: meram mechanics Heartbeat House
Model: M-M
Affiliation: Heartbeat house
Modularity: yes all tools can be swapped out.
Production: Limited
Material: tikulini leather trousers, Alusteel and Plastoid armor. SkinSuit
Integrated Shock-padding Military-grade Electronics (Helmet and Body Armour.)
Sonic Dissipator/Dampening Overlay Biorestorative Underlay EMP/Ion Resistant Materials.
Fire Retardant Textiles.

Classification: Multipurpose,
Weight: 7 kg.
Quality: class 7
Blaster: 7
Projectile (penetration): 7
Projectile (kinetic energy transfer): 2
Blade (slash): 7
Blade (stab): 3
Lightsaber: 0

Special Features:
Similat to a Storm troopers armor the Meran Engineering armor features the following.
Helmet Features:
  • Alusteel Coating.
  • Interior Cellular Padding (High Comfort.)Visual/Audio Player and Recorder (10 Hours of Content before Datacard is filled and needs to be swapped)Annunciator/Vocabulator.Sonic/Aural Dampeners.
  • Broadband Antenna with Rangefinder.
  • Short-range Integrated Commlink with First Order encryption keys.
  • Long-range Integrated Commlink with First Order encryption keys.
  • Rebreather/Environmental/Oxygen Filtration System.
  • Primary Oxygen Supply Tank (Two Hours.)
  • Poly-chromatic/ Anti-Flash Visor (Self-Repairing.)
  • Holographic HUD (Blink-Command Capable.)
  • Multi-Frequency Targeting and Acquisition System.
  • Combat Scanner/ Life-Form Scanner/ Sonar Mapper/ Motion Scanner/ Radar.
  • Visor Modes: Tactical, Infrared, Low-light/Night, Thermal, Ultra-Violet.
  • Anti-Ion Mesh.
  • Integrated Floodlight(s) (Concealed/Retractable Solar Ionization Panels.)

Torso:
  • Carbon-Impregnated Coating
  • Genetic Coding Activation
  • Compression Body Glove (Whole Body)
  • Backplate-mounted Power Pack with replacement Cells.
  • Baradium-core code key thermal detonator.
  • Emergency/Reserve Power pack (Redundant System.)
  • Secondary Oxygen Supply Tank (Six Hours.)
  • IFF Circuitry and Transponder.
  • Environmentally Sealed and Pressurised.
  • Anti-Ion Mesh.
  • Grenade Bandolier/ Combat Webbing Clips and Mountings.
  • Grav Chute/ Jetpack Backplate Mounting.
  • Shoulder Sheathe for Combat Vibroblade (Optional.)
  • Magnetised Surface(s) for Primary and Secondary Weapons.
  • Ehergy sink
Utility Belt:
  • tikulini leather coating
  • Personal energy shield
  • Deionisers
  • Field Medical Bag
  • Field Rations (One Week's Worth.)
  • Multitool.
  • Flare Gun (Two Charges.)
  • Combat De-Ionizer(s)
  • Anti-Security Blade.
  • Various Pouches (Containing a multitude of items, including but not limited to, additional plasma cartridges and etc.)
Gauntlet(s):
  • Magnetic Adhesion/ High-Traction Grips
  • Liquid Cable Launcher
  • Dampener Aerosol Projector (Four Charges, Re-loadable Cartridges.)
  • Reinforced Duraplast Concealed Knuckle-plate Vibroblade (Retractable.)
  • Anti-Ion Mesh.
  • Forearm-mounted Comms/Holo-Projector/Data-streaming Device. (Linked to Helmet's HUD.)
Greaves:
  • Alusteel greaves
  • Magnetic Adhesion/ High-Traction Grips.
  • Celluar Padded Insoles (High Comfort.)
  • Additional Combat Vibroblade Sheathe.
  • Reinforced Knee Plating/ Bracing. (Strain reduction when Crouched, or during lengthy periods of Cardio.)
  • Knee-plate Dart Launcher (Paralytic Toxin, Four Darts - Re-loadable.)
  • Ranger's Utility Boots

Strengths: full to the teeth with tech and made to match stormtrooper armor
highly resistant to blaster and slugs.
Due to the Heatflex
the use of Shell spider silk provides resistance against and deflects standard blaster fire and vibroblades
and the Warming crystal weave helps regulate body temperature in colder environments.
the use of sonic and Emp dampeners make the suit resistant to them.
Weaknesses: Restricted to only Meran Mechanics and hartbeat house Employees. .
intended more for engineering as opposed to combat.
Due to the heatflex fabric the armor Provides no added protection against lightsabers, blunt weapons or kinetic force.
and is Not suitable for use in warmer environments as it could lead to overheating.

Description: made to match storm trooper armor. the Engineer armor is made to be comfortable and as light as possible but carry as much as possible kibble.
Primary Source:
SkinSuit
Ranger's Utility Boots
+Shell spider silk provides resistance against and deflects standard blaster fire and vibroblades
+Warming crystal weave helps regulate body temperature in colder environments.
 
[member="Kami Meran"] -

First thing is first. HeatFlex fabric is 'Limited Production' and you have this submission as 'Minor Production'... Going to need this dropped to Limited Production or HeatFlex Removed.

Second - Can you please add the strengths/weakness from HeatFlex (if you keep it a material) and any other materials to the strengths/weaknesses of the armor?

Also, a few sections of the template are missing. I'm going to need you to go back over the sub and fill-in the following sections completely:
  • Primary Source
  • Special Features
  • Intent
Once these concerns are adressed I'll be able to better review and judge your sub. Thank you!
 
[member="Kami Meran"] - First, sorry for the delay. Family dropped in unexpectedly.

Where is the '2' in armor rating against Lightsabers coming from? The only thing resistant is tikulini leather, which requires alchemizing to retain qualities post-death per site canon, and I see no evidence of Alchemy in this sub. Plus, it's also only the belt, which personally wouldn't even warrant an armor rating to me.

Can you explain that armor value, or remove it?
 
Kami Meran said:
Featflex fabric trousers
Heatflex (please correct the spelling) is affiliated with Heartbeat House. Unless this submission's affiliation is also to Heartbeat house, this material cannot be used in this submission.
 
[member="Kami Meran"]
What I meant by "affiliation is also" was that this submission must have the affiliation match the heatflex submission - so its affiliation must be specifically with Heartbeat House. Clan Meran cannot be on the affiliation because the affiliation would not be matching the Heatflex Submission.

Basically, the affiliation needs to be Heartbeat House, it can't be XYZ and Heartbeat House, it must only be Heartbeat House. So you can either remove the Heatflex if this is not specifically for Heartbeat House, or you can change the affiliation to match the submission.
 
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