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Codex Denied Clan Calore

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To flesh out a character I write
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GENERAL INFORMATION
Organization Name: Clan Calore
Classification: Mandalorian Clan / Political Body
Affiliation: Mandalorian Enclave, itself
Organization Symbol:

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GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION
Headquarters: Hypori
Domain: Hypori

Notable Assets:
  • The Calore Fleet


SOCIAL INFORMATION
Hierarchy: Seeing no need for convoluted systems of governance, the Calores adhere to the standard Clan hierarchy following their Alor (chief) and when the time calls his Alor'ad (Captain) his Ver'alor (Lieutenants). New recruits or foundlings are called Evaar'tal (Newbloods) and are distinguished as such until they pass their rites of entrance.

Membership: In the spirit of true Mandalorians, entrance into Clan Calore is gained by birth or adoption. Adult adoption is common, and are welcomed just as happily as children are. Clan Calore requires no special tests or harsh trials to become a part of the family, only asking for loyalty to the clan, and the following of the Supercommando Codex, and the Resol'nare.""



Curios: The clan symbol worn on the right pauldron of the beskar'gam

Rules: The Resol'nare is held to a high standard among the Calore Clan, and all six tenets are followed, though the Supercommando Codex is the main guideline for behavior and conduct among members of the Calore Clan.

Goals: Survive the onslaught. Return to Mandalore, and empower the Clan.

MEMBERS

Elias Calore - Alor

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

The first Calore known in the records of the clan is Uriel Calore, who fought in the ranks of the Neo-Crusaders. From what the histories tell, Uriel was a skilled warrior, and would go on to settle the plains of Mandalore after the end of the Mandalorian Wars, founding the clan.

In the next few millennia, Clan Calore would for the most part play minor parts in the history of Mandalore, but would always find themselves on the front lines. Other members of the family include Thrax Calore who fought beside Jaster Mereel, and the brothers Destin and Kai who followed Darth Maul to their deaths during the siege of Mandalore.

After the rise of the Galactic Empire the Clan was one who took flight from Mandalore, and for centuries would roam the galaxy as a mercenary army, selling their services to the highest bidder, from the Alliance to the Imperial Remnant.

While operating as mercenaries the numbers of Clan Calore swelled, growing to a few hundred warriors along with more women and children.

After the death of Caesar Calore, and the rise of Elias Calore as Alor, Clan Calore has allied themselves to the Mandalorian Enclave, and settled on the hard to find world of Hypori
 
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Valerian Calore Valerian Calore

It's always nice to see a new Mando clan! There's some things that we'll have to work on to get this sub ready, but I'll gladly work through them with you.

The first thing is the image credit. Since you have an image in the sub, you'll have to link the source. If it is an original piece, then you can mention that in the image credit field instead.

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Since there are no applicable permissions or links, go ahead and add N/A to each of these fields.

Affiliation: Mandalorian Enclave, itself
In this section, please link the Enclave's faction page, as well as your character.

This part of the sub is also missing the "Description" field. All fields need to be included in the template unless stated otherwise within the template, so that will have to be added back in.

Headquarters: Hypori
Please link the planet in this field.

Also, under the Social Information section, the "Climate" and "Reputation" fields are missing. These will need to be added back in as well.

Aside from those required changes, I have a recommended change as well. In terms of their domain, what is the clan's relationship with Hypori? You mention the clan itself doesn't like convoluted systems of governance, does this ever put them at odds with the ruling body of the planet? Are they active protectors of the planet? How does the local population feel about them? Some of this can also be fleshed out in the reputation section once you add it back into the template, but bits like this will really help flesh out how the clan interacts with the world around them.

Once you've made the required changes, let me know and we'll see about getting this approved.
 
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