Approved Tech Chill Pill

[Zef Halo]

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Intent: To provide sentients of the galaxy a pill that reliefs negative psychological and physical symptoms. To prevent drama.

Development Thread: If needed.
Manufacturer: Chill Pill Industries
Model: 1.0
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: No
Production: Production: Mass-Produced.
Material: Adrenal, Algarine Torve Weed, Barenth Healing Plant, Behot, Guroot, Marcan Herb

Description: The goal and the function behind Chill Pill can easily be defined from its name. It has been created for the sole purpose of providing the galaxy with a simple pill with rejuvenating functions. The Chill Pill is a very versatile pharmaceutical product that can be used by anyone that is 3+ Human years old or the equivalent of that for other species. By versatile, it is meant that it is for absolutely everyone. From soldiers on the battlefield, to desperate wives. It inducess calmness, composure, increased focus and immediate easing of pain or exhaustion. This pill is not a battle decider but using it may give the user the needed strength and stamina to escape. Furthermore, it can also give a temporary upper hand to a user in a battle.

Functions of the Chill Pill:

• Immediate easing of pain for a temporary time.
• Inducing the user with the 'Second Wind' effect which is basically a surge of stamina to keep the user going for a bit more.
• Increases focus greatly for a duration of 6 hours.

Effect is amplified with each pill taken.

The side effects of the Chill Pill are:

• Temporary effect
• Sudden feeling of nausea after effect wears off.
• Overdose leads to falling unconciouss.

Side effects are amplified with each pill taken.

Overdose = More than a three pills a day.




Primary Source:
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Chill+Pill
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Adrenals
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Algarine_torve_weed
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Barenth_healing_plant
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Behot
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Guroot
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Marcan_herb

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Zef Halo"]

Few questions:

1) I don't know if I should take this submission serious because of this line:

The goal and the function behind Chill Pill can easily be defined from its name. It has been created for the sole purpose of providing the galaxy the so-much needed 'chill' as it has been in great demand lately

2) How does it chemically work, what canon chemicals are used in the "chill pill"

3)

especially for adults who have not yet grown up

The passive aggressive is strong with this one.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Spencer Varanin"]


1) Do you want me to rephrase it?

2) I have no idea, I don't have a degree on that subject. xD If you'd like, I can look up some RL stuff on the Internet and add them.

3) Yes, want it removed ?

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Zef Halo"]

1) Rephrase both because they sound like joke submissions.
2) Do some research on Wookiepedia - the star wars universe is pretty extensive I'm sure you could find a canon or something similar in canon to pull inspiration from.
3) Remove all passive agressive from this submission and from your other one.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Spencer Varanin"]


Check how it looks now. Does it seem good ?

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.