Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos

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[member="Mark Sage"]

Solid bio. I'm not crazy about your playby. Your writing seems solid from what I have read, but I'd like to see more senses involved. Try to show instead of tell.

Touch, Sight, Smell, Sound, Taste.
 

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