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Approved Starship Chaotic Stealth Ship

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Stealth Ship
  • Length: 50 m
  • Width: 50 m
  • Height: 10 m
  • Armament: Very Low
L-s1 laser cannon x4
Decoy tubes x6 (1 decoy each)
  • Defenses: Low
Ion shield
Magnetogravitic shield
  • Hangar Space:None
[*]Hangar Allocations:
  • Starfighters: 0 squadrons
  • Support Craft: 0 squadrons
[*]Maneuverability Rating: Very High
[*]Speed Rating: Very High
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Very Slow: 4

STANDARD FEATURES


Ion shield

Magnetogravitic shield
L-s1 laser cannon
Decoy tubes

ADVANCED SYSTEMS


Cloaking device


Stygium (https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Stygium#Stygium_crystal_cloaking_device)
Strengths:
  • Invisible: The stealth ship has a cloaking device rendering it invisible when activated
  • Speed: The Ship is a very fast and maneuverable
  • Decoy: The ship has decoy tubes that can screw up radar

Weaknesses:
  • Cloak: The cloak can be disabled by an interdiction field
  • Weapons: The ship has low powered shields and few weapons
  • Decoy: The decoy tubes only work when ship is invisible

Description:


Crew: 2-4

Passanger Capacity: >10

Officer: 1


Storage Room

Armory

Quarters x2


Decoy Tubes x6


This is a sister to the Mark I Jammer, it was made as an upgraded version. Only two were made due to its sophistication and expense. The ship is very powerful and can go full cloak on a dime. The Cloak turns the ship invisible to the naked eye with a slight shimmer.


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Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Renn Garrick"]

As with the sister series, I'd like you to beef out the description on this vessel just to lend clarity in how it will be used in roleplay. Just so you're aware going forward, as stated in the template, this is actually a standard requirement for all advanced features in submissions.

And again, your ratings are also over. Please can you adjust to balance them as needed.
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Renn Garrick"]

You're still over, I'm afraid. Hyperdrives aren't counted in balance checks for vessels besides Starfighters.

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You still also need to address my request for further details on the cloak in the description.
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Renn Garrick"]

Ratings don't seem to have changed from when I requested the edits. Just so you're aware, a vessel of the current size automatically has a fixed rating of 'average' when calculating Hangar rating. This simply because it cannot field/house a squadron.

As for the cloak, there's actually various types that have various different effects. I would hazard a guess it would be stygium as opposed to hibridium, but I would just like you to clarify which type the ship happens to have on board.
 
[member="Runi Verin"] I gave what the cloak was, but I don't know if you want me to turn it down more or just informing me, but there is no hangar in any case
 

Runi Verin

Two pounds shy of a bomb.
[member="Renn Garrick"]

If you could just specify if this is a Hibridium or Stygium based cloaking device. As you can see from their respective Wookieepedia entries linked, they are fairly different in capabilities, so it is important to differentiate between them. Please note that the Hibridium version will require some additional weaknesses.

Do that, and I will pass it accordingly.
 
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