Approved Tech C.U.R.T Armor

[Arumi Zy]

Image Source: http://www.halopedia.org/New_Mombasa_Police_Department pest that Tineye could come up with is the halo wiki

Intent:To create a standard issue medium grade armor for ZyTech Security and mercenary forces, as well as a model for mass production.

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Manufacturer: ZyTech
Model: C.U.R.T Combat, Urban, Response, Tactial

Affiliation:Open Market

Modularity:Features a molle system that allows the attachment of equipment and pouches such as magazine pouches, medkits, etc.

Production:Mass

Material:Synthetic cloth, Plastoids, Durasteel, Kevlar
Classification: Multipurpose

Weight: 11.7934 KG

Quality: 5

Special Features: Features a weaving Molle (Modular Lightweight Load-carrying Equipment ) That allows for the attachment and removal of pouches designed to hold magazines, cameras, medkits, etc. Kevlar weave makes it resistent to cutting and bladed weapons while the Plastoid coated Durasteel plates give protection from blasters and ballistics.

Description:The C.U.R.T armor suit was designed with urban operations in mind where agility and flexability took over from pure protective power. The armor is designed with protecting the vital areas in mind while leaving movement points from such as joints and the arms to remain unhindered though unarmored or lightly armored with kneepads and arm guards bought secondary. The Modular Lightweight Load-carrying Equipment or Molle system allows for flexability in kit enabling the soldier on the go to safely and quickly snap on their equipment load

 

[Camellia Swift]

[member="Arumi Zy"]

These are just some minor complaints, but could you clean the sub up a little. Also the weight needs to be in kg, you have no unit listed just a number, and the image credit is supposed to link to an artist page or something similar if you can find it. Tinyeye works great for that.

https://www.tineye.com/

Aside from these there's nothing else there's really an issue with.

 

[Arumi Zy]

[member="Camellia Swift"]

Cleaned it up a bit, don't know why it always goos up once i paste it. Forgot to add the KG fixxed that, the best source that google and tineye are giving is the halo wiki.

 

[Camellia Swift]

[member="Arumi Zy"]

Alright, pending secondary.

 

[Soliath Devin Talith]

Kevlar isn't an actual Material in Star Wars, however because of its relatively simple composition and the fact that everyone knows what you're getting at, i think its fine.

Approved.