Approved Vehicle Brezak

[Negative Prime]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: A personal Scout vevecal for the SJO
• Image Source: http://s142.photobucket.com/user/asb_one/media/quake4_vehicle11.jpg.html
• Canon Link: ha
• Development Thread: if needed
• Primary Source: na

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Meran mechanics
• Model: Elz-f55
• Affiliation: silver jedi order.
• Modularity: weapon can be swapped out
• Production: Mass-Produced.
• Material: Alusteel / Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Role: Fast Attack Vehicle
• Height: 2 meters
• Length: 7 meters
• Width: 3.7 meters
• Weight: 100 kg
• Minimum Crew: 1
• Optimal Crew: 1
• Propulsion: Wheels
• Top Speed: 187 kph
• Armaments: 1 Blastech E-web repeating blaster
• Squadron Count: na
• Passenger Capacity: 3
• Cargo Capacity: na
• Misc. Equipment:
• Standard Life Support
• Pressurized Atmosphere
• Hologram
• Attitude Thrusters and Vertical Thrusters
• Burst Thrusters
• Hologram Emitters
• SE-Vigiliant Automated Sensor Beacon
• Subspace Transceiver
• Gunner Targeting HUDs and Image-Rec Launcher Upgrade
• Non-pneumatic tires made with Plasteel armored with Titanium
• Inertial Compensator

SPECIAL FEATURES

• able to make small jumps of 9 meters in lengths of a running start as small thrusters engage to push the vehicle to cross gaps.
• these thrusters at a full burst can be used to lift the vehicle off the ground for one second.

DETAILED SPECIAL FEATURES

• Attitude Thrusters Vertical Thrusters Burst Thrusters

Strengths:

• fairly fast and agile

Weaknesses :

• limited Armor
• no cargo space.

DESCRIPTION
After joining the SJO Honoko was depressed that her skills were far sub-par.
so she went to the drawing board.
the result was the Brezak a fast attack scout vehicle able to be used in combat or to scout areas.
the vehicle can make large jumps of up to the length of 9 meters depending on approach speed.
thrusters act to give a push to aid in the jump.
these can be used as a last ditch effort or to clear obstructions.
unfortunately it fly's like a brick and therefor offers absolutely no flying control save a upward and forward thrust.
these upward thrusters used with the pneumatic suspension can give the Brezak a 1 meter upwards jump.
and has been used to make the vehicle dance by juvenile padawans.
hollo emitters give the Berzak a limited Active camouflage from a distance disguising it as a rock ect

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Julius Sedaire]

[member="Honoko"] - First, a good attempt here, but a few problems.

• The Particle Beam Cannon is a bit too strong in terms of fire power for a 'lightly armed scout vehicle'. Secondly, it is also usually seen on AT-AT's at a minimum, and typically capital grade weaponry.
• The Bomb-Bays also do not fit the role of a lightly armed scout vehicle. I would recommend scrapping all the weaponry on-board and going for a light hitting, fast firing turret weapon to keep the theme of this vehicle. At most I would keep it to one weapon as well.
• This vehicle states it can only jump a height of 1 meter, then states 9 meters in the description. I am going to need you to chose one or the other.
• What is the intent/capability of the hologram emitters on this?
• How much directional control/how accurate are the jumps made by this?

I have some other points, but these clarifications and fixes will do for now.

 

[Negative Prime]

[member="Julius Sedaire"] sorry weapon was a hold over from a heavier version.
the jump is length akin to the batman jumper thing.

 

[Julius Sedaire]

[member="Honoko"] - Your weakness of lightly armed does not fit with a E-Web and grenade bays, especially not given the size of the vehicle. Please either remove it as a weakness and give it a new one, or lighten your weapons load.

You did *nothing* to fix the discrepancy between jump distances. The batman reference is vague. You have numbers in the sub, please make them agree.

 

[Negative Prime]

[member="Julius Sedaire"] sorry i may have misread you last time. this better?
the 1 meter jump is like this.

Spoiler

 

[Julius Sedaire]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Raziel]

<p>Approved.</p>