Bhaltair Dhimani

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

Ground Control to Major Tom.​

Ground Control to Major Tom.​

 

[Tobias Wraith]

Wut?

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

Take your protein pills​

and put your helmet on​

 

[Darron Wraith]

Unless I'm just super tired, I'm pretty sure they are going to ask you to sub the actual Hulk as a species.

As well as the exact reasons for him transforming. I have a sub for this guys arm, so I'm pretty sure you'll have to do some work.

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

Ground Control to Major Tom​

Commencing countdown,​

 

[Ibaris Varanin]

[member="Bhaltair Dhimani"]

For the love of... I don't know what, introduce some spaces into that mess, please. It hurts my eyes. :mellow:

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

engines on​

Check ignition​

and may God's love be with you​

 

[Matsu Ike]

there is currently a species subbed and approved based on the hulks. Just not human enjoy and welcome

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

[spoken]​

Ten, Nine, Eight, Seven, Six, Five, Four, Three, Two, One, Liftoff​

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

I would ask that you please make this a bit more...Star Wars...by editing this from its Hulk wiki origins to more fitting descriptions.

We do not approve bios, but I hope you consider working further on this bio before RPing with the character.

 

[Darth Avida]

I don't even.

 

[Tiro Vanek]

Wha...

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

This is Ground Control​

to Major Tom​

You've really made the grade​

And the papers want to know whose shirts you wear​

Now it's time to leave the capsule​

if you dare​

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

That's fine, I'm just wondering why you posted it before you'd even edited out the Earth references. That just makes it look sloppy.

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

This is Major Tom to Ground Control​

I'm stepping through the door​

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

You've made a good start.

Personally, even if I trust your good intentions, what's listed here as theoretical does come up against our 'no gods, no immortals' rule.

I would scrap all the pre-done stuff and write even a simple, concise bio with more fair and balanced strengths. Don't give people maximums you'll never use, give them maximums which are within the rules and the codes of fairness.

[member="Bhaltair Dhimani"]

 

[Azula Tindara]

[member="Bhaltair Dhimani"]

Came here as you're in a thread with me. Honestly, if you hulk out in a thread near me I'm just bailing from that level of rediculous.

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

And I'm floating​

in a most peculiar way​

And the stars look very different today​

 

[Azula Tindara]

[member="Bhaltair Dhimani"]

No, you're right there. I've been harsh. I should judge by the writer, I tend to judge based on:

1) Being able to spin a good story
2) Originality of Characters
3) Technical writing ability

In that order.

 

[Bhaltair Dhimani]

For here​

Am I sitting in a tin can​

Far above the world​

Planet Earth is blue​

And there's nothing I can do​

​

Though I'm past​

one hundred thousand miles​

I'm feeling very still​

And I think my spaceship knows which way to go​

Tell my wife I love her very much​

she knows​

​

Ground Control to Major Tom​

Your circuit's dead,​

there's something wrong​

Can you hear me, Major Tom?​

Can you hear me, Major Tom?​

Can you hear me, Major Tom?​

Can you....​

​

Here am I floating​

round my tin can​

Far above the Moon​

Planet Earth is blue​

And there's nothing I can do.​