Approved Starship Berdick Micro Freighter.

[Lyth Meran]

Image Source: http://karanak.deviantart.com/art/AA-Corvette-Clacker-138861624
Affiliation: As-Aki race.
Manufacturer: Meran mechanics
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/91265-meran-mechanics/
Model: Micro Freighter. remodeled Fighter.
Modularity: no
Production: Minor
Material: 'Durasteel.
Classification: Freighter

Length: 9 meters

Width: 6 meters

Height: 2 meters)

Armament: 1 Twin Tiam & Bak ion cannon.
1 torpedo bay holding 5 photon torpedos
Armament Rating 5

Defense: Rating 15

Squadron Count: 12
Special Features: Has been stripped down and transformed into a mini Freighter.
It has a micronized cockpit and most of its interior has been turned into a cabin.

Maneuverability Rating: 4
Speed Rating: 5
Hyperdrive Class: Hyperdrive Class: 2
Strengths: Heavy armor. is the only ship suited to the As-Aki
Weaknesses: Low Weapons. small size,

Description: as with all Meran Mechanics ships the Berdick is a repurposed and recycled Old republic scrap.
this is a extensively remodeled S-12 Blackbolt that has been turned in to the equivalent of a Freighter com
as a result is is almost useless to a larger being. its micronized cockpit is almost toy like to those of a larger size.
as a result the 50.8 millimeters tall As-Aki view it as a frigate it in comparison to there size even acting like a capital ship to them.
it has a cargo capacity of 5 tons due to an added cargo hold on its undercarriage.
due to a Drip feed style power system the ship can theoretically be powered for century before requireing charged.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/S-12_Blackbolt
Development Thread: if needed
Intent: to create a ship for the As-Aki.
Who Can Use This: Limited can only be used by small beings.
Primary Source:

 

[Gir Quee]

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[Gir Quee]

Manufacturer: Meran mechanics

Please hyperlink "Meran mechanics" to its approved company submission.

Hangar: 14

Can you clarify this? Does this ship carry 14 other ships? Or is this supposed to be a squadron count?

As a general note, this seems to be using an older template. Given that its intended size, I'd probably use the current starfighter template.

 

[Lyth Meran]

was a squadren count.
that eas the templet in the template section.

 

[Gir Quee]

[member="Lyth Meran"], to clarify, this is what we need (I'm assuming that you're using the capital ship template given that this lists a hangar):

Armament: (You may provide your armament in list format and must provide your vessel an Armament Rating on a scale of 0-20, where 0 is no weapons, 1 is very light weapons, 5 is light weapons, 10 is average weapons, and 20 is heaviest weapons. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the class of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry unless the ship also has a breakdown of weapons. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Typically requires development: Anything above 16 for a max size vessel. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology)
Defenses: (You may provide your shield and armor systems in list format and must provide your vessel an Defense Rating on a scale of 0-20, where 0 is a man in a space suit hanging on to an engine, 10 is typical defense, and 20 is heaviest defense with heavy plating and multiple layers of shields. Defensive Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. You should list particular systems under special features. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Typically requires development: Anything above 16 for a max size vessel. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology)

In other words, I need numerical rating for both its armament and defenses. I'd recommend something like this (assuming that you're using the corvette template (which is what this currently looks like):

Armament:
Rating 4
1 Twin Taim & Bak ion cannon
13 proton torpedoes

Defense:
Rating 8

Description: as with all Meran Mechanics ships the Berdick is a repuropsed and recycled Old republic scrap. this is a extensivly remodeled S-12 Blackbolt

Could you flesh this out a little bit more? We generally want a minimum of several sentences in the description per submission. Some things to maybe include is the story/history of the design. You may want to talk about the micronized cockpit and how many things this carries, or its internal layout.

 

[Lyth Meran]

done i think.

 

[Gir Quee]

[member="Lyth Meran"], this is still missing the defense rating.

I see that you've switched this to the fighter template (by having a squadron count instead of a hangar), which changes a few things.

Squadron Count: 15

Length: 40 meters Width: 21 meters Height: 10 meters)

The average squadron count is 12 ships that are each 12 meters long. The smaller the vessel, the higher the squadron count. The larger the vessel, the lower squadron count.

At 40 meters long, an appropriate squadron count would be around "4".

If you want a high squadron count of 15, an appropriate length would be around "9 meters".

Which size you choose to go with will influence your armament, defense, and flight performance ratings.

 

[Lyth Meran]

dun i hope.

 

[Gir Quee]

Armament: 1 Twin Tiam & Bak ion cannon. 3 torpedo bays each holding 4 photon torpedogiving it 12 Proton Torpedoes. Armament Rating 5

Weaknesses: Low Weapons. small size,

The listed weapons loadout now is about average (perhaps slightly over) of what is normal for a starfighter. For an armament rating of 5, I'd recommend: "1 Twin Taim & Bak laser cannon, 1 torpedo bay (3 proton torpedoes)".

This still needs a defense rating. To reflect its heavy armor, I'd put in something like this just after the armament rating:

Defense: Rating 15

 

[Lyth Meran]

dun did it

 

[Gir Quee]

1 torpedo bay each holding 4 photon torpedogiving it 12 Proton Torpedoes.

If you'll delete "giving it 12 proton torpedoes", this will be ready for approval.

 

[Lyth Meran]

dun.

 

[Gir Quee]

1 torpedo bay each holding 12 photon torpedos

As per your earlier description, I'd prefer this to be 3 or 4 torpedoes total.

While it is possible to have a starship this size with 12 proton torpedoes, it would not be considered to be lightly armed with an armament rating of 5.

 

[Lyth Meran]

changed.

 

[Gir Quee]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved.