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Approved Tech AUT/NIO-03

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create an awesome weapon.
  • Image Source: Here.
  • Canon Link: Not Applicable.
  • Permissions: Not Applicable.
  • Primary Source: N/A.
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Assault Rail Gun.
  • Size: Average.
  • Weight: Heavy.
  • Ammunition Type: Powercell, Pellet Magazine.
  • Ammunition Capacity: Average.
  • Effective Range: Long Range.
  • Rate of Fire: Low.
  • Reload Speed: Low.
  • Stopping Power: High.
  • Recoil: Low.
SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Modified from most rail guns in the market, the NIO-02 acts differently when firing. By wielder's activation this gun can hold a certain number of bolts inside its barrel, charging them and keeping them separately for when released the gun fires this accumulated amount in a series of burst.

STRENGTHS
  • Stopping Power - The NIO-03 is a ridiculously lethal weapon against organic material, hitting his mark like a hammer with the potential of blowing apart limbs or torsos.
  • Armor Penetration - As a Rail Rifle firing dense against the most ordinary materials which body armor are made can be quoted as if hitting a 'protective wet paper', the stopping power of this rail gun makes even most lighter vehicles and even heavy ones, not safe.
  • Silence - When firing, the Rail Rifle produces a slight whining sound, unlike the loud blast noises produced by ordinary blaster, as it charges up before unleashing the shot, however, the bolt itself does not leave any trails nor does it make loud noises allowing the shooter to undergo stealth for most of his time wielding the weapon.
WEAKNESSES
  • Charging Delays - The time spent charging an shot is dependant on amounts per shot. (3 seconds 2 round burst, 6 seconds for a 4 round burst, and 10 seconds for the full 6 round burst.)
  • Cooling Delays - Cooling of this weapon is mandatory for a three seconds period per charge fired. Trying to use this weapon in a rapid-fire setting can cause the internal components to warp and make turn this weapon completely useless.
  • Maximum Charging Capacity - This weapon can not charge up more than six rounds for its burst. Any attempt of the otherwise can cause this weapon to overheat.
  • Low Ammo - Power cell is drained faster with full charges, cutting the maximum bursts down to only 20 per cell. (40 bursts for a 4 shot, and a full 60 bursts for the 2 round shot)
  • Heavy - This Rail Gun is heavy as is the ammunition for it if compared to other weapons the same size, as each blast is incredibly dense and the power packs are rather bulky.
  • Durability - This weapon needs constant maintenance in order to preform correctly, without proper maintenance the user will risk catastrophic weapon failure.
DESCRIPTION
Created by the careful hands of Automatron by the use of an dangerous model of technology. The NIO-03 was meant to be an innovating weapon of destruction, It is an immensely potent rifle with a barbaric purpose. It fires super dense bolts of energy that when used against infantry, these bolts can punch through with enough force to take off limbs and pierce the thickest body armors regardless of material. Due to its power and nature, it is classified by the New Imperial Board as an Anti-Material rifle and is not supposed to be used against infantry targets due to the nature of its brutality.

The weapon was meant to charge up its bolts before firing them, concentrating its deadly energy on the barrel before unleashing a deadly bolt against its enemies. Made of blue energy, the firing power of this gun after being shot will collide against targets and cause its mark to be ripped apart, or, when facing low electric resistant materials, it will cause them to those parts to be blown to bits in to the air. However, as discovered by the Automatron engineers, the gun has showed difficulties against certain kind of electric absorbing materials such as pyronium, phrik, and other electric-resistant compounds.
 
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Shuklaar Kyrdol

CEO of Breshig War Forge Consolidated
Hello Lunafreya Solidor Lunafreya Solidor , as you know I'm Shuk and I'll be reviewing this submission. First issue is you need to re-add the permissions field on the top.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
If the weapon is indeed a railgun, then naturally it would also require some sort of solid rounds as ammunition. Please list that.

SPECIAL FEATURES/STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
You mention a two round and four round rate of fire, something like that would bear mentioning under special features and strengths, given that it is not common for a railgun to fire that many rounds at once.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Additionally, you are actually one point over. Please reduce a single rating.

That said, I don't really see any other issues with the submission, fix this and it can be pushed on through. Tag me once you've sorted these issues. Thank you.
 
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