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Ar'khos Corporate Combine

[SIZE=11pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]


  • Image Source: N/A for now


  • Canon Link: N/A


  • Development Thread: N/A


  • Primary Source: N/A


[SIZE=11pt]CORPORATION INFORMATION[/SIZE]


  • Corporation Name: Ar’khos Corporate Combine


  • Headquarters: Arkania


  • Locations: Arkanian headquarters | Cadriaan Manufacturing Facility | Ar’khos Corporate Laboratory on Pelagon


  • Operations: Scientific R&D, Engineering, Manufacturing | The 500 year business plan of the Ar’khos Corporate Combine, which was recently refreshed and is now in the first year, calls for ACC to grow into a completely self-sustaining company with products that will range from watches and suits, to every individual component of the ships they hope to one day manufacture.


  • Tier: Tier 2


[SIZE=11pt]DESCRIPTION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Ar’khos Corporate Combine was founded by an Arkanian family that eventually resuted in a half-Arkanian heiress by the name of Ivlyn Mecetti, and it is currently led by Ivlyn Mecetti’s father, Par’kh Ar’khos, who serves as the Executive President of the Ar’khos Corporate Combine. It has expanded into the Tapani sector as of late, leaving its home where it is part of the corporatocracy, and building a new laboratory on Pelagon. With the capacity to manufacture much of what they intend to produce, the Ar’khos Corporate Combine is ready to do their best in high technology, biotech and other fields of bioengineering, and really science and engineering in general, with their slow but sure expansion hoping to encompass a great many things by the time they are done with their jobs. Development of shipbuilding bases, real estate assets, a fleet, and similar things will allow the Combine to fulfill other goals. It isn’t the most influential corporation in the Tapani sector, but is smart at what it does. The company accepts private manufacturing requests, as well as research and development requests from private individuals or organizations - including rare genetic modifications, and perhaps even Sithspawn created by Ivlyn some time in the future, that will be offered in a more secretive manner - but also works on behalf of the Tapani noble houses and the Galactic Alliance when it comes to Galactic Alliance space. It is essentially loyal to itself. When it comes to whether or not they are seen as benevolent or grinding planets into dust, the Corporate Combine prefers not to completely obliterate places in a short period of time. Besides, that would make them enemies. If you strip mine a populated planet into oblivion, it doesn’t look good for anyone. Any more illicit operations, or ones that border on the edge, are likely to be kept on the more hidden side of things.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Note: The R&D section is capable of instigating research in a wide variety of areas, ranging from materials research to creating starship modifications, but being able to produce these things and fulfilling all the roles that a subsidiary could is another matter entirely. Manufacturing might have to be fulfilled by another company - and they might not be able to do it as well as Ar’khos could with a subsidiary, or Ar’khos might have to share manufacturing methodologies that the manufacturer might use to further their own technologies despite a patent - or the product, such as a rare genetic modification or a set of them designed for a specific customer, could be an expensive, almost always one-off procedure performed by a handful of highly skilled specialists.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]RATIONALE[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Ivlyn does not own nor control the company. She holds stakes in it, is the daughter of the owner, and works as a scientist for the corporation (something that stretches her even further), and often serves as her father’s envoy and proxy, but she does not have full control nor full ownership of the company. Should her father die, however, and even if Ivlyn has retired from the company when this occurs, Ivlyn will find herself in some kind of control, but without a majority stake of the Ar’khos Corporate Combine. As a scientist of the company, she is entitled to a paycheck, and could play a part in the research and development of different products. As an envoy and proxy, she can fulfill different administrative duties, but isn’t the actual owner nor is she in full control of the company.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The majority of the company’s shares were acquired by Mon Calamari Shipyards’ new Executive President, Kemoth of Asteria. While it still functions largely as normal, the company has become subservient to Mon Calamari Shipyards.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Subsidiaries: None[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Parent Corporation: Mon Calamari Shipyards[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Stuffs:[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Former Mon Calamari Shipyards app[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt][CANON COMPANY; NOW PARENT COMPANY][/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Mon Calamari Shipyards[/SIZE]
 
[member="Ivlyn Mecetti"]

Companies have only a single HQ. Please remove one. Headquarters also count towards locations. The maximum is three.

Please notate that this is a canon company at the bottom of the submission.
 
Updated. Please see the new Mon Calamari Shipyards application - as the last one was archived on creator request - for further information when it is up. I hope to postpone approval until the application can be up, and am officially contesting ownership of Mon Calamari Shipyards (seeing as how it was archived at owner request, I don't think there is any question as to the status of Mon Calamari Shipyards).

[member="Jamie Pyne"]
 
[member="Ivlyn Mecetti"]

A few things:
  1. Did you switch this company submission from a canon company to an original, non-canon company? In the future please note these types of changes so that it is not confusing for judges.
  2. Submitting a request to take control of Mon Calamari will grant it Tier 2 status, and not eligible to own subsidiary companies per factory guidelines, therefore this submission will not be allowed subsidiary status.
  3. I can either proceed judging this submission as a non-affiliation of Mon Cal, in which case you'll need to remove all references to that company, or I can archive this submission so that you can apply for Mon Calamari and work on raising that company to Tier 3, and then re-submitting this application.
 
1.) Sorry 'bout that!
2.) The company rules state that it cannot go below tier three in status. "5. If a Canon Company Owner is absent for more than 30 days, any writer who does not already own a canon company may contest your claim by creating a submission of their own for the same Company name. The Factory Judge presiding will alert a Role-play Judge, who will then attempt to contact the previous Canon Company Owner. If the Role-play Judge fails to contact the previous Canon Company Owner within 72 hours and determines the Canon Company Owner inactive, the Role-play Judge will then alert an Administrator who will then transfer ownership of the canon company along with one level tier drop (may not fall under Tier 3) to the new Canon Company Owner, along with any edits made. The old submission will then be archived."
3.) Please see above! Thank you ^_^

[member="Jamie Pyne"]

P.S. Not trying to correct you here or anything. It's just that I read them, and wanted to be sure that what this post says is correct. If it is not, then I simply don't recall the rules being stated differently elsewhere.
 
[member="Ivlyn Mecetti"]

Ownership is not being transferred. The previous iteration of this company is archived. The company is being re-created long after the original owner discontinued the company. Therefore it follows the following rule located in the Standardized Rules.

Cira said:
1. All new companies and canon companies begin at a max of Tier 2.*
Edit: Upon looking at the current canon company ownership list, the link you have for Mon Calamari is inaccurate. The current owner and submission is here. Therefore my previous statements will stand.
  1. Submitting a request to take control of Mon Calamari will grant it Tier 2 status, and not eligible to own subsidiary companies per factory guidelines, therefore this submission will not be allowed subsidiary status.
  2. I can either proceed judging this submission as a non-affiliation of Mon Cal, in which case you'll need to remove all references to that company, or I can archive this submission so that you can apply for Mon Calamari in hopes that the previous owner does not validate their claim once the factory reopens, and work on raising that company to Tier 3, and then re-submitting this application.
 
Jamie Pyne said:
[member="Ivlyn Mecetti"]

Ownership is not being transferred. The previous iteration of this company is archived. The company is being re-created long after the original owner discontinued the company. Therefore it follows the following rule located in the Standardized Rules.


Edit: Upon looking at the current canon company ownership list, the link you have for Mon Calamari is inaccurate. The current owner and submission is here. Therefore my previous statements will stand.
  1. Submitting a request to take control of Mon Calamari will grant it Tier 2 status, and not eligible to own subsidiary companies per factory guidelines, therefore this submission will not be allowed subsidiary status.
  2. I can either proceed judging this submission as a non-affiliation of Mon Cal, in which case you'll need to remove all references to that company, or I can archive this submission so that you can apply for Mon Calamari in hopes that the previous owner does not validate their claim once the factory reopens, and work on raising that company to Tier 3, and then re-submitting this application.
Alrighty, understood.

Thanks for the help, [member="Jamie Pyne"]

I believe that I will archive this, work on raising Mon Calamari to Tier 3, and then re-submit this app, while hoping the previous owner doesn't revalidate their claim.
 

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