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Approved Species Arkanian Offshoot - Warbreed

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name:Arkanian Offshoot (Warbreed)
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins:The Arkanians created several offshoot species by modifying DNA, to fill roles in their society. https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Arkanian_Offshoot/Legends
  • Average Lifespan: ~200 years
  • Estimated Population: Rare (Exile Communities)
  • Description: An Arkanian offshoot race with white hair, tall, muscular bodies, and light-colored eyes.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Oxygen Atmosphere of at least 15% concentration.
  • Average Height of Adults: 1.9 meters
  • Average Length of Adults: NA
  • Skin color:Full range of human colors, but often pale
  • Hair color: White
  • Distinctions: Long-lived, inherently muscular, and tall, these Arkanian offshoots are more solidly built than most Arkanians, and live longer lives due to biological enhancements.
  • Races: Very similar to human beings.
  • Force Sensitivity: Low
Strengths:
  • In the top 10% of human strength range
  • Can see well in darkness
  • Very healthy (and consequently long-lived.)
Weaknesses:
  • Eyes sensitive to bright light
  • Tendency towards strong passions requiring suppression to live in civilized society
CULTURE
  • Diet: Omnivore
  • Communication: Speech and Hand signals. Arkanian and Basic are common languages
  • Technology level: Standard
  • Religion/Beliefs: Species tends towards Militant Corporatism that embraces free will.
  • General behavior: Literally bred for battle, the Arkanian Warbreeds enjoy forming into hierarchical collectives which engage in warfare, treating their ability to fight as their primary commodity and skillset. When not serving as soldiers, they tend to be passionate about everything they do, and are often seen as bawdy and excessive in their behavior.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Arkanian people are obsessed with tinkering with life, both for the improvement of self and the improvement of society. To this end, they created various offshoot species to serve roles in their society, with the genetics of these species tailored to accomplish various roles. These roles included servants, technicians, and construction personnel. A flirtation with a soldier offshoot, called the warbreed, ended poorly.

The Warbreeds were created to be generally larger, stronger, and healthier than the Arkanian base population. This was meant to make them more effective and enhance their survival in battle. The Warbreeds also share the Arkanian low-light vision and bright-light sensitivity. The Arkanian Warbreeds were not superhuman in their abilities, but tended to the upper range of humans, matched only by the best human athletes. As a consequence of the genetic tinkering with Warbreeds, they have lower than normal force sensitivity.

The Arkanians treated their offshoots poorly, often little better than slaves. One-thousand prototype warbreeds were placed into a special marine unit on an Arkanian defense vessel. Half were male, and half were female, with an intention to evaluate their comparative performance in battle and determine if there was a difference in performance that needed to be addressed.

Due to poor treatment, the Arkanian Warbreeds rebelled and took over the ship. A virus was released into the environmental systems of the captured craft- a failsafe against just such an occurrence. However, it was not entirely effective and approximately 200 of the 1,000 Warbreeds survived.

The survivors fled from Arkanian space and have made a living as soldiers and mercenaries ever since. They are driven by powerful passions, including the passion to breed, and have frequently preferred breeding among themselves to keep their ‘species’ alive. Arkanian Warbreeds in the galaxy today are the offspring of the original rebellious exiles.

The true Arkanians have proven frequently diabolical in their treatment of offshoot species, and so the exile population of Warbreeds has never felt comfortable returning home. Instead, they live as vagabonds among the stars, often taking service with armies and mercenary companies that desire capable combatants for their forces.
 
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Alright overall this is a pretty solid and well made submission! Always good to see. There however just a couple of issues but they should be quick fixes!

For Image Credit you have provided links but they just lead to the pictures themselves. I'll need to see links to the gallery that you found these pictures in or if you generated them using the AI then links to the AI used will work as well. Permissions and Links both have the template text in them still and will need to either be filled out accordingly or simply replaced with N/A if there is nothing to be linked.
 

Cubanwriter

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Cubanwriter Cubanwriter

Alright overall this is a pretty solid and well made submission! Always good to see. There however just a couple of issues but they should be quick fixes!

For Image Credit you have provided links but they just lead to the pictures themselves. I'll need to see links to the gallery that you found these pictures in or if you generated them using the AI then links to the AI used will work as well. Permissions and Links both have the template text in them still and will need to either be filled out accordingly or simply replaced with N/A if there is nothing to be linked.


Hello,

Thank you for this review.

I have made the requested changes.

Cheers!
 
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