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Approved Tech Arisa Yune's Jacket

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Intent: Make a styling jacket for Arisa
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Sasori Research
Model: 'Not Applicable'
Affiliation: [member="Arisa Yune"]
Modularity: None
Production: Unique
Material: Light Canvas, Blended Cotton, Chemical Wash, Brass, Sasori Mesh
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 2kg
Quality: 10 blasters/sabers, 6 ballistic
Special Features: Sasori Mesh, Hidden Pocket, Fireproof, Water Resistant
Strengths: Strong Resistances
Unassuming Appearance
Lightside Restricted
  • Recoils darksiders
  • Causes sickening sensation when in contact with Darksiders

Weaknesses: Lacks Body Coverage
Lightside Restricted
Unable to hide Force Signature
Useless if the Force is Blocked.

Description: A rather plain looking jacket made for Jedi Yune as she dislikes wearing the traditional robes. Like the Jedi robes being made, it incorporates the new mesh being produced by Sasori giving it extreme protection over the areas covered. Unfortunately, a lack of padding means that while it will stop a bullet, most of the kinetic force will transfer through and will result in heavy bruising at best or shattered bone and internal damage at the other extreme. Also underlying the jacket's banal appearances are a special chemical wash that renders the jacket mostly waterproof, protecting Arisa from rain and the like though it'll still soak through if submerged. It's also mostly fireproof except the cotton will char after more than a brief exposure though the interwoven mesh will more than stand up to even prolonged burning. Though the rest of Arisa won't be so lucky unless she gets special pants and everything else made too.

The jacket has four external pockets and two internal pockets where you'd expect them to be on most coats, it also contains a fifth pocket hidden in the small of the back that's designed to hang right even when weighted down and is completely waterproof even after being submersed. The end of her left sleeve has three pen/pencil/stylus stows for convenience and there's a place above the right breast pocket for a row of data and code cylinders to be stored.
Primary Source: Sasori Mesh
@Matsu Ike
 
Domino said:
Not Proper Armor
This is not a suitable weakness for a class 10 armor submission.



Domino said:
Lacks Jedi Authority
This is not a weakness.



Domino said:
8 ballistic

Domino said:
Material: Blended Cotton, Chemical Wash, Brass, Sasori Mesh
Weaknesses: 6 Weakness
  • Variable levels of protection
    Does not dampen sound
  • Does not block disruptor
  • Does not block plasma
  • Does not block acids
  • Does not soften kinetic impact
The Sasori Mesh does not soften kinetic impacts. So quality 8 with an otherwise cotton jacket is not going to fly.
 
Dropped down to six, i'm hesitant to go lower considering someone might use this as a precedent for a material that Matsu worked extremely hard for. Left description of massive bruising and shattered bone alone because it's still fitting.

Removed false weaknesses and strengths and added a line about the Mesh's weaknesses.
[member="Lily Kuhn"]
 
[member="Domino"]
Can you please list out the weaknesses which apply most to this submission from the Sasori Mesh submission? Feel free to quote it in the weaknesses for this submission, so long as the mesh is noted as a primary source. I'm asking for it to be listed out here so that the members who do come to check this submission do not need to either search for the mesh or go the extra step of venturing to the submission for the Mesh and reading through the several thousand word submission.
 
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