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Approved NPC Angelo Revil

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Isamu Baelor

Protector of The Iron Realm
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Source: Ocelot from Metal Gear Solid 3

- - - - - Basic Information - - - - -
Name: Angelo Revil
Loyalties: The One Sith
Role: A Lieutenant Colonel under the command of High Colonel Isamu Baelor
Age: 30.
Species: Human.
Force Sensitivity: None.

- - - - - Development Threads - - - - -
Coruscant Prison Break: One Sith vs Rebel Alliance

- - - - - Appearance - - - - -
Angelo is a man at his peak. His body is strong, well-built, molded by years of training in the military. His jaw is square, and an aquiline nose sticks out from his face. A blonde crew cut adorns his head. His blue eyes exude a piercing gaze with an unsettling aura.

- - - - - Personality - - - - -
Angelo is brash, hot-headed, and arrogant. A deep disrespect towards his enemies has taken root in Angelo’s personality. He relishes in their defeat and humiliation, and takes great elation in disrespecting and insulting them.

- - - - - Weapon of Choice - - - - -
Throughout his years at the academy, he has taken on a familiarity with the weapons he was trained with. A blaster rifle for ranged encounters, and a vibrosword, arrogantly named “Fury”, for melee encounters.

- - - - - Wealth - - - - -
The life of a soldier is not a wealthy one. He has a meager amount of money.

- - - - - Combat Function - - - - -
Befitting his training at the military academy, Angelo is a fierce frontline soldier and commander. He is eager to jump into the breach, and fight the enemy head on. His training makes him a ferocious combatant.

- - - - - Skills - - - - -
Years of training, and years of battle have crafted Angelo into an exceptional warrior. He has proven himself time and time again, leading troops with exemplary talent, and an envious skill with blasters and melee weapons.

Strengths:

Training and Experience: Years of training in the academy, and years of fighting in battles, have given Angelo a wealth of experience in war. He is an expert in the use of military weapons, and a learned tactician.

Leaders
hip: From years of working under Isamu, Angelo has gleaned at the mind of an experienced commander, and has learned the art of leadership.

Weaknesses:

No force sensitivity: Angelo cannot feel or harness the force as many others in the galaxy can. Such a deficiency leaves him vulnerable to the abilities of the force, and at a disadvantage to those who yield it in battle.

Hot-headed: He is quick to anger at perceived slights and injustices. Such a trait leads him to make snap judgements that could be uninformed and dangerous.

Arrogance: His innate abilities have caused him to have a inflated sense of ego. He is less likely to learn from his mistakes and improve.


- - - - - Notable Possessions - - - - -
Floating from battle to battle, he is a wandering warrior. The only notable possessions he owns are the armor on his back, and the weapons in his hands.

- - - - - Other Notes - - - - -
Angelo Revil stands as a twisted reflection of his commanding officer. The facade of a proud One Sith officers masks an ugly beast that stirs below the surface. He has no love for his people, and no desire to protect them. What drives him is greed and selfishness. An almost ravenous hunger for power and standing. Deep down, he is insecure and afraid that he is as weak as the people he derides.

- - - - - History - - - - -
A gutter rat from the bowels of Coruscant, the future didn't look bright for Angelo Revil. His life was a cycle of scavenging for food, searching for places to sleep, and protecting himself from the deplorable inhabitants of the lower levels of Coruscant. When he came of age, he joined the Sith army, looking to escape the dreadful life he had on Coruscant. After training, he found himself in the command of Isamu Baelor. His performance in battles led him to being promoted to Lieutenant Colonel. From starting at the bottom, Angelo has firmly set his sights as high as he can see, and continues to climb the ladder of standing.

- - - - - Intent - - - - -
To play a large role in Isamu’s story arc, and to show that threats to Isamu's command won't just come from outside of the Sith.
 
Hi [member="Isamu Baelor"],

All in all it's pretty good but could you please add:
  1. please add a clear list of strengths and weaknesses {2 at least} in list format
  2. Please add a little background/personal history on this character in the other notes section, what happened in his life to get him to where he is now ? etc.
Thanks
Callum
 
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