Feedback Almost 3 years later

[Dreidi Xeraic]

Hey,

So, figured since its nearly 3 years since I made Dreidi and started writing her in one way or another it would be a good time to get some feedback. First time doing a long time Padawan, having spent most of the time writing through teen years to where she is on the cusp of achieving Knighthood.

Let me know what you guys think, good, bad, areas to improve.

Thanks!