Aeropolta

[Timothy Hoyt]

Name: Aeropolta
Region: Unknown
System: Gassoloa
Suns: Magania - Yellow Dwarf
Orbital Position: 5th planet, Habitable Zone, 2 Astronomical Units from Magania
Moons: none
Coordinates: A6 near the corner with A5, B5, & B6
Rotational Period: 24 hours
Orbital Period: 730 days

Class: Gas
Diameter: Center - 2 miles, Atmosphere - 500,000 miles
Atmosphere: Type 1 Atmosphere
Climate: Temperate
Gravity: Standard
Primary Terrain: atmosphere with floating islands, islands have many different terrains.

Native species: Aeropoltians
Primary languages: Aeropolt
Government: "tribal" council - A council made up of the leader of the five "tribes" of Aerpolta. The Major Cities are named after these tribes with the capital just being called Capital.
Population: 5 billion
Demonym: Aeropoltians
Major cities: Malinara, Balltine, Bidark, Lilalac, Quiladoke, Capital
Major imports: None
Major exports: None
Affiliation: None

Culture: Their culture revolves around the force guiding them to where they are supposed to go. Because of this some Aeropoltians are close to the dark side while others are closer to light. However, unlike what most people believe this does not cause war. Instead it brings them all together in a understanding that there is always two sides to a story. Also, due to the fact that there are three genders and a third gender is the wisest that the third gender is usually in charge of all Aeropoltians.
Technology: flying droids of all kinds, slug weapons, cloning facilities (used for animals).
History: Aeropolta was created by the Celestials many years ago. The center of the planet is actually a machine that uses of force to contain the planet's atmosphere and keep the islands suspended in the atmosphere. The Celestials then created the Aeropoltian's using their knowledge on genetics to create their wings. They then left the planet before the first Aeropoltians awakened. The Celestials then observed as the Aeropoltians grew and developed as a society. They watched as the Aeropoltians separated into small tribes. They watched as they start to develop their own believes and customs. They watched as the Wise took over the other two genders. They watched as the two genders rose up and challenged the Wise into accepting them as equals. They watched until they recall for whatever reason. After the Celestials left, Aeropolta continued to develop with the three genders being equal. It continued to develop into the planet you see today.
Notable PC's: Samuel Milo

Intent: Samuel Milo's Home World

 

[Nikolas Faselli]

There are too many problems with this planet. First of all, the submission would have to be extended to meet the standards we have here. Second, using anything new before it has been approved is forbidden. It includes making characters who have backstories about the planets.

But the species. I would say, that making a new winged humanoid species is practically impossible in Chaos, especially if they look/can look like angels. The floating island thing is not quite good, the population and amount of tribes don't match, and there are other minor mistakes.

You are free to second chance the submission, but I'd advise you to change the concept of the native species, making them wingless, and definitely doing something about the floating islands. Denied.