Feedback Aadihr's 500th post

[Aadihr Lidos]

It's still early but with how new I am to the format and medium I'd like to invite feedback on how I have been writing Aadihr.

There has certainly been ups and downs with my personal satisfaction of my own posts up to this point; I'd like to invite external feedback (actionable feedback especially welcome) so that I can focus on improving weak areas of my writing.

Any feedback on Aadihr - formatting, tone, inconsistency, vibes, story arc, anything really - is welcome.

Someone said "check back at 500" so here I am

At exactly 500! A few months and 200 posts later and I'd like to solicit the same sort of feedback as back at 300.

A lot has happened since then and I feel like I've got a better grasp of post–turmoil Aadihr; figuring out who and what he is both in and out of character during a hectic period for both of us.

Anyway, any thoughts are appreciated!
I kinda noticed I was at 499 posts and had to return here

 

[Connel Vanagor]

I like how chill he is. He's a true Healer, but that is not to say that he can't hold himself up when he needs to. There is a clear growth in the character (and your connection to him). We're in a "trinity" thread (Aadhir, Drystan Creed , and Connel) but II want to see us in something serious down the line.

Fungi

 

[Acier Moonbound]

Only ever had one encounter with him, but from what I have read and experienced - I think Aadihr's a great character. As I told you, one of my favourite threads was the one we just did together. This was all due to how adaptive the writing was, Aadihr's personality, his dialogue, his introspection - despite it being a non-action heavy thread, I had a blast.

Can't wait to thread with him more in the future.

 

[Niysha]

Eh, he's alright.