Feedback A Year In Review

[Jax Thio]

Tomorrow will mark a year since I have joined this wonderful site of Star Wars: Chaos! I've had a great time making friends and writing stories set in the Star Wars Universe! But of course, I know that I must get better as a writer. So..... to everyone I RP'd with, how am I as a writer? What do you think of my writing style and character building? As much as I constantly critique myself with my writing, It's just as good to have a fresh perspective on my writing. Here are my OCs that I've been actively writing lately:

Jax Thio
Darth Angonous
Eboi Seth
Markus Kortu
Darth Sorn
Deena Mott
Saul Colsan
Zanvic "Ironhide" Dak