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As the title says- it’s been about a month and I was hoping someone could tell me whether I suck or not
I think you're doing pretty well. You've adapted quickly to some of the structures that play-by-post roleplaying sites use, and are pretty active in the community aspect of it on Discord. I really like your rationale you add to your prose, telling us why your characters are doing something. I don't think your posts are too short or too long, either.
If I had some critique, it'd just be two things. First would be to slow down a little with character ideas and develop a few at a time, so you avoid burning yourself out by too many RPs or writing characters that are too shallow to impart meaningful stories to. And the second would be to find what pushes you out of your comfort zone and dip your toe into it once in a while, so you can develop yourself as a writer.