Confederate Dauntless Colonel
I've been on this site for 176 days already and it's been one of the best writing experiences I've honestly ever heard. I've met and interacted with so many unique people with fascinating stories and characters. I will admit I have been in awe at how well some threads and posts have been written, envious, and hoping that one day I will be able to even be compared to them. Due to this, I've wanted yo hear your guy's thoughts on what I've written so far with my Character, Colonel Anakwor Farlorn, and the Carian First-and-Only regiment. I think the parts I could be struggling most with would be attempting to juggle a large cast of characters in narrative threads where I don't have full control over the events. I also think I am flawed in being a good RPer, having too many events happen in a single post, and not interacting with others during a story. I've wanted a second pair of eyes over my issues so that I may get feedback on how to better myself.
Basically: some tips, thoughts, and feedback on what I've written so far.
Thank you for reading this and thank you even more if you decide to review my posts.
Here are threads where I've posted under this character and other info.
Colonel Anakwor Farlorn (Detailed description of Chapters at the end of it)
The Caria First-and-Only Ranger Regiment
Short Story: A Forlorn Day
Chapter One: In the Lives and Ruins of their city
Short Story: Rest, Respite, and New Assignments
Chapter Two: Coat of Silver
Chapter Three: Chaos Pact
Chapter Four: The Lost and the Forgotten
Chapter Five: Fury of Silence
Chapter Six: Back to Basics
Basically: some tips, thoughts, and feedback on what I've written so far.
Thank you for reading this and thank you even more if you decide to review my posts.
Here are threads where I've posted under this character and other info.
Colonel Anakwor Farlorn (Detailed description of Chapters at the end of it)
The Caria First-and-Only Ranger Regiment
Short Story: A Forlorn Day
Chapter One: In the Lives and Ruins of their city
Short Story: Rest, Respite, and New Assignments
Chapter Two: Coat of Silver
Chapter Three: Chaos Pact
Chapter Four: The Lost and the Forgotten
Chapter Five: Fury of Silence
Chapter Six: Back to Basics