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[Laphisto]

well ill be, feel like only a few months ago i was at 2500 but yet here we are again! i think Laphisto as a character has changed drastically since the last time i had done one of these and my favorite concept to date has been adding small visual cues to his presence, in his eyes and his body language from before the Orphaned world thread to now

for some context of what im talking about iv linked some of my more interesting threads that partake to this theme down below a compare and contrast i feel like there is still alot o can do for this character and im very much interested in where his story will lead. i have a few ideas that sees him doing one thing or another with his newfound power but i wont do any spoilers here!

is there anything anyone might want to see for laphisto? how am i doing with this character. and what do people think about him as a whole

the way he was before the orphaned world thread

here when he goes back to lothal after first helping the EOTL defend the planet

a small social thread

After the orphaned world events

a duel against an ally that quickly turned violent where you can see laphisto struggling with the aftermath of the Orphaned world events

when Laphisto meets the mandalorian Empire and has a small longing to feel welcomed by his kin once more

laphisto has some trouble wanting to fight against the mandalorians having trouble truly picking a side

the moment he realized and comes to terms with the fact that he might be apart of clan ordo but he knows they do not see him as kin

and one of the more recent and interesting ones iv been able to write showing him truly being unable to hold back the power building inside of him

here you have Laphisto and reign having differing views on how to approach teh war with the ME

oh and my newest thread iv been loving thus far exploring the new visual effects of laphisto

also the duel with both diarchs where i got to fully unleash and test out some new powers has been fun

 

[Iandre Athlea]

Find a mate.

 

[Laphisto]

Find a mate.

pain. suffering even

 

[Zara Saga]

I only can offer a few thoughts here and there as I haven't been fully involved in his story or active enough that is.

1. I really enjoyed the orphaned world arc. That was a blast. Plus it gave a good insight into the character, provided a little more depth to him.
2. Really love how you PvP with him. It was so fun, and the dice rolls you incorporated were great.
3. Your war posting with him and Lilaste is top notch. You include everyone and make sure everything is noted.

I dont think im in the position to offer any critical feedback, maybe that will come with me being more active in his stories. But you are seemingly doing great with him.

 

[Alan]

1. I wish you'd change your signature it's off center

 

[Laphisto]

1. I wish you'd change your signature it's off center

I will now move it even further off center in my attempt to fix it

 

[Alan]

I will now move it even further off center in my attempt to fix it

I’m going to kill you with a David Bowie painting