101st Front Liners

[William McPride]

IMAGE SOURCE: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/outcast-3d---fallout/​

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NAME: 101st Front Line Division​

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INTENT: To serve as "Canon Fodder" for The Few True​

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AFFILIATION: The Few True​

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AVAILABILITY: Unique​

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QUALITY: C, trained​

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TYPE: Infantry​

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STRENGTH: 10 men​

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DESCRIPTION: The 101st wear standard TFT battle armor, and serve has the front liner leaders for the men in the back.​

They are trained to take some hits, and be able to defend.​

They are expendable, and can be replaced with just about any old joe who is strong.​

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Under review

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="John Kranston"]

Hello and welcome to Codex. I'll be your Judge on this one. This seems like a pretty straight-forward unit, though I have a few things that needs to be addressed before I approve this.

NAME: 101st Front Line Division

The name is misleading. A division is a large military unit usually consisting of between 10 000 and 20 000 soldiers. It tends to be the smallest combined arms unit capable of independent operations. Yet the total number of soldiers in this submission is 10. The appropriate term here would be squad.

I'll give you two options. Either replace "division" with "squad", or change availability from "unique" to "uncommon".

DESCRIPTION: The 101st wear standard TFT battle armor, and serve has the front liner leaders for the men in the back.

I will need to see links to either Wookiepedia or Factory for any type of weapons or armour used.

Thanks

 

[William McPride]

I actually am pending for deletion of the faction, so if you could delete this that would be great.

thanks. [member="Darth Pyrrhus"]

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="William McPride"]

Alright. Putting this up for archival.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"], [member="Lorelei Darke"]

 

[Quietus]

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