Hello, As a writer, and a human in real life. I make mistakes or mishaps with characters and other such. And to try and combat these problems, I have made this critique thread for people to mention in places where I have messed up. This is a place to help me as a writer, and as a person. Not a place for you to downvote me, or to make fun of me, or the like. So if any of you have anything to say about any of my characters, You may do so.