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Approved Tech The Bloody Ace

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[SIZE=11pt]Out of character information[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Intent: to create a personal weapon for Colden[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Image Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]https://images-na.ss...lL._SL1500_.jpg[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Canon Link: If needed[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Primary Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]https://www.destinypedia.com/Ace_of_Spades[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Adostic Arms[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], Colden Renfrew[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Market: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Personal[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Model: Customized/ modified Duke .44[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Modularity: Yes (Explosive and armor piercing rounds)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Production:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Unique[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Material: [/SIZE][SIZE=10.5pt]Durasteel, Duranium, and Dallorian alloy[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Classification: Hand Cannon slug thrower[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Size: Large[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Weight: Average[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Ammunition Type: Slugs[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Reload Speed: Average ( can be increased with training and modifications)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Effective Range: Medium ( max 110 yards)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Rate of Fire: 60 rpm[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Stopping Power: High[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Recoil: High[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Speical featuers: Ligth trigger,allows for fast trigger pull, Fanning the hammer allow for a rapis succession of shots with a sunicant plenty to accuery[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Decription: The Bloody ace is custom made and heavily modified Gundark.44 the was Customed order for Colden Renfrew on his 16th brith day and has made mods to it over years this weapon is truly one of kind, [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Strengths: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]great stopping power, good fire rate, good intimidation factor, look really cool, ligth wogth trigger[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Semi auto, limiter rounds in the cylinder (12 round cylinder) high recoil[/SIZE]
 
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Greetings Guardian, My Name is Byf here!

Wait.

Jokes aside, when it comes to this submission, it is currently conflicting with our Plagiarism Policy.

Plagiarism will not be tolerated.
In particular, this submission is practically identical to Cayde-6's iconic weapon, so I'd like to give you the opportunity to make this your own.

Firstly, the name would need to be changed to something different than Ace of Spades. Additionally, you'd need to change the reference to the Duke Mk. 44 (as we'll be touching on in that submission for the same reason). These would address the plagiarism concern to the letter.

While you're making your updates, I've also noticed that you are missing a few sections of the Ranged Weapon, Technology Template. Another one of our policies is to fill out every field of the template:

The entire template must be used in your submission. Users can customize templates to their own personal liking, but the template's fields are not to be changed/removed/altered, additional information may be added but base fields may not be changed or removed.
Please update your submission to include the missing fields and tag me once you're finished. I'll give this a fresh look over and you'll be good to go!
 
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