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Zannahs Spellbook

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Matreya

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: This submission is to provide members of the Fringe with the means of training in the Magic of the Sith.
Development Thread:

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Sith Sorceress Lord Zannah
Model: Unique Spellbook
Affiliation: Sith (Originally) / Fringe (Currently)
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Paper/binding

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Spellbook
Size: Two-Handed
Length: 10"x7"x4"
Weight: 3.62 Kilograms

CONTENTS:
An autobiographical account of the life of Sith Master Sorceror Lord Zannah. The book, despite it's training abilities, has the effect of making a reader weak/harming them. It is unknown why, but to read the book for to long can result in physical issues that are retained for life.
(OOC Note: This is entirely up to the user, and is entirely debatable. The effects are automatically there as to use such an item needs a side effect)

Despite once holding an immeasurable amount of Offensive spells, but after the eons and multiple destructive forces interacting with the book it holds only a few, defensive mostly.

Spells:
-Spell of Interpretation (Interpretation)
-Spell of Concealment (invisible)
-Spell of Ears of Chiroptix (hearing)

Incomplete:
-Spell of Sense of a Veshet (Incomplete: Only night vision)
-Spell of Healing (Incomplete: Only bare essentials for healing)
 

Jaxton Ravos

Mindwalker of the Outer Rim
This submission is basically a user-created holocron with a canon name slapped on it. I have multiple issues with this. Firstly, it's forcing new things on a very recognizeable and important character from canon. If this submission were to be approved we would be changing the canon about Zannah and saying she made a spellbook, when we have no indicators that she did. Secondly, their isn't any development for this listed, so in essence a faction is gaining access to teaching on some rare force powers for free. Thirdly, these spells don't even match what Zannah had done and learned. She never had the capacity for healing, nor did she learn nightsister spells. Four of the five skills you have listed Zannah didn't learn.

Overall, this submission is denied, on premise of bad following of canon, lack of dev thread, and powergaming.
 
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