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Approved Tech Z7 Probe Droid

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide customers with a high-end droid capable of fulfilling the roles of scouts.
  • Development Thread: Soon™
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Designer: Hannibal Oryen
  • Manufacturer: Hegemonic Automaton
  • Model: Zenithar-Series Work Droid
  • Affiliation: Ord Cestus / Customers
  • Modularity: Yes (see below)
  • Production: Mass
  • Material: Durasteel
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Second Degree
  • Height: .5 Meters
  • Length: 1.3 Meters
  • Movement: Repulsorlift
ARMAMENTS
  • [No built in armaments; incapable of utilizing any weapons without illicit modification.]
MISCELLANEOUS EQUIPMENT
  • [x1] J2 Droid Brain
  • [x1] Holocamera
  • [x1] Vocabulator
  • [x1] Sensorscope
  • [x1] Ionization Buffer
  • [x1] Optimization Interface
  • [x1] Miniaturized Sensor Array
  • [x1] Holonet Transceiver
  • [x1] Sound Dampener
  • [x1] Floodlight
  • [x1] EnhanceScan General Scanner
  • [x1] NeuroCoat 'Everlast' (coating over internal components)
  • [x1] Environmental Shield - Level II (optional)
  • [x1] Aquatic Exploration Kit (optional)
DESCRIPTION

Eons ago, when our weary galaxy was still young, there were whispers of a market Hegemonic Automaton had neglected to tap into. This market, of course, was for probe droids. Automated scouts that could be used to conduct in-depth reconnaissance of worlds or simply act as high-quality cameramen for a film production. Or if you, heaven forbid, would like to spy on someone from afar and return with wonderful camera footage.

They wanted it small and discrete, but Hegemonic Automaton didn’t particularly care. Hegemonic Automaton didn’t want innocuity. They wanted efficiency and excellence. As a result, Z7 Scout Droids tend to be rather noticeable things. Their movements are almost entirely muted thanks to a sound dampener, but one would have little trouble sighting one from afar in broad daylight and optimal weather. But the Z7 makes up for this by being able to detect, relay, and transmit a wide volume of information at any given time.

Being unarmed and roughly the size of a Viper Probe Droid’s head, the Z7 is ill-suited for combative engagements. The outer shell is not constructed of anything special. Durasteel is both sturdy and cheap enough to fulfill the physical protection needs of the probe droid. Alternatively, Z7s may come equipped with a Level II Environmental Shield. This grants it excellent protection from extreme conditions, as seen on planets such as Mustafar or Hoth.

The internal components are nothing to get excited about. Everything outside of the J2 Droid Brain is constructed of plasteel or durasteel for mechanical components. These are rather durable and with a long-shelf life of their own, but Hegemonic Automaton prides itself on making sure its droids last longer than anyone else’s. The implementation of NeuroCoat ‘Everlast’ on these components extends their lifespan, reducing the need for regular maintenance and the replacement of parts. This is all the NeuroCoat does. It does nothing else. It does not repair parts that are damaged. It does not brew coffee. It does not smuggle spice. It cannot communicate with people. It will not ascend to mastery over the Force or conspire to dethrone Kings and topple governments. It will not solve the Greek debt crisis.


It is a coat of special paint that reduces the need for maintenance. It is not Laminanium.

An Ionization Buffer prevents the droid from being disabled via Ion blasts or Electromagnetic Pulses. This in itself is enough to prevent it from being captured, but it comes with an emergency protocol to wipe all information from its databanks at a moment’s notice should it be physically restrained. This should prevent its attackers from accessing vital information on the probe droid’s owner, as well as any information the probe droid had transmitted/was preparing to transmit.

The Z7 comes with sophisticated cartographic software and the ability to network with other Z7s. In the event orbital satellites are not available or are unable to see the surface of a planet, Z7s can be deployed in moderate swarms to rapidly map out planetary surfaces. Z7s are not limited solely to the surfaces or cave systems of planets, however. For a paltry fee, Z7s can also be equipped for deep sea exploration. This requires massive reinforcement of the Z7’s shell and special waterproofing of various components.

Aside from the above listed features, the Z7 comes with a myriad of equipment and tools usually seen in probe droids. Aside from its versatility and the unparalleled processing power afforded to it via its J2 Droid Brain, the Z7 functions exactly as one would expect a probe droid to. Except, since it is a Hegemonic Automaton model, far, far better.
 
RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review
 
[member="Hannibal Oryen"]


After having reviewed the capabilities of NeuroCoat and Laminanium, I can't help but to feel that the two provide very similar effects on a submission.

Due to this similar benefit, I'm going to ask that a dev thread be done that pertains specifically to the NeuroCoat.

Even though this is a Mass Produced product, I'm only going to ask for 10 posts. Since... it isn't actually Laminanium. Just very, very similar.
 
[member="War Hydra"]

Lamanium is self-healing armor. It can repair itself back to 100% capacity after being damaged.

NeuroCoat does not enable self-healing. If a droid utilizing it is shot or in any way physically damaged, it will not be able to repair itself. That is not what NeuroCoat does. NeuroCoat can only reduce the need for regular maintenance. Nothing more. As indicated in the tech submission for NeuoCoat, this reduced need for maintenance is not even permanent.
 
[member="Hannibal Oryen"]


Hannibal Oryen said:
NeuroCoat does not enable self-healing. If a droid utilizing it is shot or in any way physically damaged, it will not be able to repair itself. That is not what NeuroCoat does. NeuroCoat can only reduce the need for regular maintenance. Nothing more. As indicated in the tech submission for NeuoCoat, this reduced need for maintenance is not even permanent.

I understand that and have read both the submission itself and your review of it.



Hannibal Oryen said:
DESCRIPTION

Everything outside of the J2 Droid Brain is constructed of plasteel or durasteel for mechanical components. These are rather durable and with a long-shelf life of their own, but Hegemonic Automaton prides itself on making sure its droids last longer than anyone else’s. The implementation of NeuroCoat ‘Everlast’ on these components give them a degree of self-repair that greatly reduces the need for regular maintenance visits by mechanics. This does not completely eliminate the need for inspections by mechanics, but it does reduce the number of mechanical malfunctions or part replacements the droid experiences over the course of its use.
The description seems to indicate that everything on the following list is covered in the self-healing paste.


Hannibal Oryen said:
MISCELLANEOUS EQUIPMENT
  • [x1] J2 Droid Brain
  • [x1] Holocamera
  • [x1] Vocabulator
  • [x1] Sensorscope
  • [x1] Ionization Buffer
  • [x1] Optimization Interface
  • [x1] Miniaturized Sensor Array
  • [x1] Holonet Transceiver
  • [x1] Sound Dampener
  • [x1] Floodlight
  • [x1] EnhanceScan General Scanner
  • [x1] NeuroCoat 'Everlast' (coating over internal components)
  • [x1] Environmental Shield - Level II (optional)
  • [x1] Aquatic Exploration Kit (optional)

My problem with this is that the submission for the paste is unspecific on what it can and can not repair, and is unspecific on if the process takes moments, minutes, or hours.
There is no maximum size object or machine or component that the paste can be placed upon, and there is no limit to the complexity of an object that can be repaired by this paste.
The only solid limit placed upon it is "cant fix bullet holes," which leaves plenty of leeway for repairing circuits otherwise damaged by electrical, ion, EMP, or force based attacks.

It is because of these open ended and unspecified limitations that I'm going to have to insist that you either do a development thread, include a substantial list of self-repair limitations, or remove the "NeuroCoat" from the submission.

I understand that this is only a probe droid, but as it stands the capabilities are too similar to Laminanium for me to be comfortable approving this without an appropriate development thread.
 
[member="War Hydra"]

War Hydra said:
repairing circuits otherwise damaged by electrical, ion, EMP, or force based attacks.
NeuroCoat cannot do any of that. Not in this droid or any of the other. As I'm sure the person who submitted the NeuroCoat will also tell you, that is far beyond the scope of what it was intended for. Bullet holes are an example. It reduces the need for maintenance. Nothing more. Anyone attempting to show otherwise can be corrected as necessary.

If any of the parts on that list become physically damaged, they will need to be either repaired or replaced by a mechanic. The NeuroCoat will not automatically repair them to even a partially functioning state. The only thing the NeuroCoat does is reduce the natural wear and tear overtime. Take, for instance, a part in an automobile. You purchase the part, it is installed in your automobile. It works just fine over the course of a couple years. Then it needs to be replaced. This is not because the part is broken, it just needs to be replaced because it was old and beginning to wear down.

Now that same part has NeuroCoat on it. It lasts an additional year or two. Nothing else. Additionally, if that part with the NeuroCoat on it was suddenly and dramatically crushed beyond all ability to function in a car accident, then it needs to be removed and replaced. Because the NeuroCoat cannot repair that part or any other part that it is applied to. It can only extend its lifespan.

If that part were made out of Laminanium, it would fix itself and there would be no need for a replacement.
 
Hannibal Oryen said:
If any of the parts on that list become physically damaged, they will need to be either repaired or replaced by a mechanic. The NeuroCoat will not automatically repair them to even a partially functioning state. The only thing the NeuroCoat does is reduce the natural wear and tear overtime. Take, for instance, a part in an automobile. You purchase the part, it is installed in your automobile. It works just fine over the course of a couple years. Then it needs to be replaced. This is not because the part is broken, it just needs to be replaced because it was old and beginning to wear down.

Work that or something like that into the description and you'll be good to go.
 
[member="Hannibal Oryen"]


I'm sorry, I think I must have been misunderstood.

Hannibal Oryen said:
If any of the parts on that list become physically damaged, they will need to be either repaired or replaced by a mechanic. The NeuroCoat will not automatically repair them to even a partially functioning state. The only thing the NeuroCoat does is reduce the natural wear and tear overtime.

This is not because the part is broken, it just needs to be replaced because it was old and beginning to wear down.
My above request was for you to specifically include in the description that the NeuroCoat is incapable of repairing damaged circuits or components and is only intended to reduce natural wear and tear overtime.
 
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