Feedback Year of Progress

[Matthew Locke]

I have seen some of these popping up and thought I would try to get some critique again.

I've been writing for just under a year now and have written on the site for short stints before now, and would love to see how people feel about my characters and what I do well, and what I do poorly.

• Matthew Locke
• William Bradley
• Duran Carr
• Jerric Luthias
• Tyr Mereel

I have some other characters that I have written but these are the main ones that I wrote this year. I appreciate all the feedback I can get.