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Faction Under the Wandering Star


Bonadan Shipyards, Ord Mantell

There were prettier places in the galaxy to hire a crew.

Bonadan Shipyards was not one of them.

The orbital station hanging over Ord Mantell smelled like hot metal, coolant leaks, bad deals, and people with nowhere better to be. Its docking rings groaned with constant traffic—freighters limping in on failing engines, tramp haulers loading questionable cargo, mercenaries drifting from one short contract to the next, and enough cutthroats in the cantinas to start a small war by accident. It was the sort of place where nobody asked too many questions so long as the credits cleared and the bodies did not block the loading lanes.

Which made it perfect.

Docking Bay 47 sat near the outer edge of the station's industrial ring, far enough from the main traffic to keep things quiet, but not so isolated as to look suspicious. Harsh floodlights washed the bay in pale white and deep shadow, glinting off stained deck plating and the rising steam from overworked vents. Cargo loaders sat idle near the walls. A refueling hose had been dragged clear and left coiled like a sleeping serpent beside the marked lane.

At the center of it all sat the Wandering Star.

A Wayfarer-class freighter, old and broad-shouldered, she looked less like a ship built for elegance and more like one built to survive abuse. Heavy central hull. Rugged lines. Modular cargo section mounted like a burden she had long ago learned to carry without complaint. Scored plating, patched sections, and enough wear across her frame to tell anyone with half a brain that she had seen hard miles and harder company. She was no polished Core luxury runner. She was a working vessel. The kind that hauled freight through bad sectors, outran trouble when it could, and shot back when it had to.

Her boarding ramp was already down.

That was invitation enough.

Aldren Thorne stood at the foot of it with the stillness of a man who did not waste movement. Broad, weathered, and stern-faced, he wore a battered brown jacket over a black shirt, one hand near his belt and the other resting at his side. His golden bionic left eye caught the floodlight every so often, giving off a dim burn that made his stare feel sharper than it already was. The faded scar crossing that same eye only added to the impression that this was a man who had lived through enough violence to stop being impressed by it.

He had posted the ad three days ago.

Simple. Direct. No unnecessary promises.

Crew wanted.
Freighter work. Long hauls. Dangerous routes. Discreet contracts.
Pay depends on usefulness.
No dead weight. No fools.
Bonadan Shipyards, Bay 47. Ask for Thorne.


That had been enough to draw interest.

And now they came.

One by one. Sometimes alone. Sometimes arriving close enough together to cast suspicious glances at each other before even stepping fully into the bay. A mechanic with a duffel and grease under their nails. A mercenary with a blaster too polished for honest work. A pilot with the look of somebody who had burned bridges in three systems already. Drifters. Veterans. Liars. Survivors. The desperate, the dangerous, and the merely curious.

None of them knew each other.

Not yet.

That tension sat in the air almost as thick as the engine heat bleeding off the Wandering Star's hull. Eyes measured one another. Hands hovered near holsters, satchels, or coat seams. Everyone was already taking stock—who looked competent, who looked unstable, and who looked like they would become the first problem.

Thorne let that silence sit.

Let them look.

Let them wonder.

Only when enough of them had gathered did he finally speak, his voice low and rough, carrying across the bay without ever needing to rise.

"You answered the ad. That means one of three things." His gaze moved over the small collection of strangers. "You need credits. You need to disappear. Or your judgment is worse than mine."

A beat passed.

"Could be all three."

No smile. No warmth. Just the dry edge of a man who knew exactly what kind of people took jobs like this.

He turned slightly, angling one shoulder toward the freighter behind him.

"I'm Aldren Thorne. This is the Wandering Star." His hand lifted just enough to indicate the ship. "Wayfarer-class. She hauls heavy, flies ugly, and stays together because I make sure she does."

His golden eye settled on the nearest of the gathered applicants, then drifted to the next.

"You don't know each other. Good. Saves me from pretending this is some kind of family already."

His tone stayed flat.

"If you're here, then introduce yourself. Name. Skillset. And one reason I shouldn't send you right back into the station."

The hum of the freighter filled the space after his words. Somewhere deeper inside the ship, a system cycled with a low mechanical throb, like the old vessel itself was listening.

Thorne folded his arms.

"Step aboard my ship, you earn your place. You pull your weight, keep your hands to yourself, and keep ship business off station gossip channels. You get paid when the work gets done. Not before."

His expression did not change.

"And if you bring me trouble I didn't ask for, I'll leave you on Ord Mantell and count that as generosity."

That was all he gave them.

No grand speech. No false charm. No effort to soften the edges.

Just a scarred captain, an old freighter, and a boarding ramp waiting for strangers to decide whether this was the start of something profitable—

or the beginning of a very short mistake.
 
Ana had already been in the bay long before most of the others arrived, standing quietly off to the side near a stack of idle cargo loaders with a compact toolkit slung over one shoulder and a smaller pack resting against her back. She made no dramatic entrance and offered no announcement, appearing simply as another face in a place where people constantly came and went without being remembered. Her attention was not on the others at first, but remained fixed on the Wandering Star as her eyes tracked along the hull to take in the patched plating and the subtle inconsistencies in how the ship settled under its own systems. She was not judging the vessel but rather assessing it and listening in the way only someone who truly understood machines could.

Only when Thorne spoke did her attention finally shift, and she listened without interruption while maintaining a neutral expression that held only a faint flicker of interest at the mention of long hauls and dangerous routes. By the time he finished speaking, she had already made up her mind, so when the silence opened for introductions, she stepped forward without any flourish or attempt to dominate the space.

"Ana Rix."

Her voice was calm and even, carrying just enough to be heard by the group.

"Mechanic. Systems diagnostics, firmware repair, signal routing…anything that keeps a ship from falling apart at inconvenient moments."

She shifted her weight slightly, relaxed yet grounded, before continuing.

"I don't fly. I don't shoot unless I have to. I fix things before they become problems."

Her gaze flicked briefly back to the Wandering Star and then returned to Thorne as she made a quiet observation.

"And judging by the way your engine harmonics are just slightly off-phase under load…you might need that."

The comment carried no arrogance but was merely a statement of fact as she adjusted the strap of her toolkit.

"As for why you shouldn't send me back? Because if something breaks out there, I'll fix it faster than it can kill you. And I don't make problems for captains. I solve them."

Her eyes held steady on his before she stepped back half a pace to give the floor to whoever came next, her presence settling into the group like a quiet constant while her attention stayed on the ship.

Aldren Thorne Aldren Thorne
 


Objective: Take a job
Location: Bay 47, Bonadan Shipyards, Ord Mantell
Outfit: "Criminal" Casual
Tag: Amiggie Lutih Amiggie Lutih | Aldren Thorne Aldren Thorne | Ana Rix Ana Rix

After their reunion on Quesh, Amiggie and Myri decided to make a trek to Ord Mantell to visit with Ami's family. Myri wouldn't admit it to anyone, but she sorta missed her family. Not her father, who had been "missing" for so long that Myri hardly remembered what he was like anymore. But her mother and uncle. And even that two bit hussy Brinna just a little bit. Of course Myri wasn't going to track down anyone herself. Especially not with the current state of Coruscant. So Ami's family was the next best thing.

With a little bit of time, and let's face it time was something that Myri and Ami had plenty of at the moment, Myri was able to find records of Ami's parents on Ord Mantell. Quesh had a good terminal link system and Myri just couldn't drink for as long as Ami could. Once Myri had revealed her find the duo managed to find a cheap transit to Ord Mantell.

A few days letting Ami and her parents visit with each other was enough to remind Myri that there were better things in life than family. Watching Ami drink and boast about fights with her father was sorta fun. But the tension between Ami and her mother, and because Ami was present tension seemed to erupt between her parents as well, made Myri a bit antsy. She took to looking over the holo to see what the next step of her life was going to be.

Becoming part of a long haul freighter crew was not exactly Myri's idea of a good job. But the danger was intriguing and it wasn't like she was going to throw her hat in with some new Empire just to have it fold. She would likely have to apologize to Brinna for crapping on her choice to smuggle for the last several years, but it would be something to keep Ami out of the bars and fighting dens. Perhaps the crew would be more honorable than others. And perhaps something else would come along quickly.

Ami and Myri arrived at Bay 47 as instructed. Another had beaten them there, Myri hoped that wasn't a bad sign. Though she doubted that a holo ad would be placed for just one spot on a crew. That could be had by giving a shout in a local cantina on Ord Mantell. The ship was old, and probably in disrepair. Neither of those things were in Myri's specialty to judge too harshly. Though she did miss the time when she could depend on a nice new shiny Imperial craft to get her where she needed to go.

The captain spoke up. He didn't look all that young or well kept either. A pretty good match for the ship. Again, not something that Myri was exactly going to fix or judge harshly. Experience was a good thing in her estimation. Especially when they were entering into a realm that was pretty foreign to Myri. Ami knew how to get her hands dirty. She'd probably end up fitting in well with the crew. Myri smirked wondering if the hold was big enough for the amount of alcohol Ami would want to take along.

Myri wasn't sure that any of the three options for why they had shown up for the job applied to her and Ami. She suspected credits was the one they would lean upon. Eventually they would need them. But joining a long haul crew was not the most efficient way to go about that. They were here to avoid boredom. Maybe that fell into the bad judgment category.

Captain Thorne gave his name, the ship's name and the ship's type. He made a statement about not knowing each other. Myri looked to Ami and shrugged. She assumed he meant the whole crew was not from some fallen captain.

The woman beside Myri introduced herself first. Myri looked at her as she spoke. The former Imperial agent wasn't sure if "Ana Rix" was unassuming by nature or on purpose, but Myri sort of envied that. Myri's pride seemed not to allow for her to just blend in. She always needed to excel and somehow be the best she could. Ana was a mechanic. Including ships' systems. Myri suspected that claim meant there was more. But she wasn't going to dig into Ana just yet.

"Myri Dara. I'm a fixer of another kind. Not much with circuits or a hydrospanner, but good at greasing wheels. You won't really know what I can do, until you need it done. Then you'll be happy I am on board." Myri didn't really intend to be so cryptic. But she hoped it would add intrigue to her "application".

"Why shouldn't point me back towards the station?" Myri chuckled. "Aside from as I said. If I leave so will the muscle I bring with me." She pointed to Ami standing beside her.
 
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Visiting Ord Mantell gave Ami a sense of dread. She wouldn’t admit it but she was afraid. Ami’s home planet had been under a brutal occupation by the Galactic Empire. What if her parents were killed? Or worse yet brainwashed? Her Dad was just as stubborn as Ami was and he would fight until the very end. Her Mom was on the other hand was a wallflower whom Ami butted heads over due to Ami's life choices. Sure, criticize Ami when she made the choice to enlist to help the family out because her Dad broke his back and had to spend the rest of his life on a hoverchair. Sure, not take the credits that Ami made through underground fights. Mom was always crying about something.

Which was why it was so good to hear her voice again when Ami and Myri visited her parents. Thankfully Mom and Dad lay low while the Empire continued their domination. Mom couldn't stop wailing over Ami being alive and thanked Myri for keeping an eye on her. Hah! Like Ami needed Buttercup to survive! With Dad, Ami exchanged war stories while drinking the night away. Ami smiled when Myri was doing the negotiations with the captain her hands drumming on her baseball bat. It was good to see her parents again alive and well. It gave Ami that peace of mind that she was desperately seeking for months but now she can focus on other things like bashing people's heads. Sadly, this Captain was busy expositing that Ami wasn't paying attention. The only thing she was paying attention to, was her growing impatience.

"So, Cyclops can we start the mission or not?" Ami grumbled towards Aldren Thorne Aldren Thorne . "Are we really gonna spend time expousing our resumes here? Time is credits and I like making credits!"

Negotiations were boring, Ami thought the Underground would be a lot less strings attached but it turned bucauracy existed everywhere. "If you're gonna let Greaser take charge." Ami motioned to Ana Rix Ana Rix . "Before us, then you're brain dead than I thought!"

Ami really hated interviews she shrugged and shook her head. "Name's Ami by the way." she sighed.

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While others at this impromptu and bulk job interview started talking, trying to convince this Thorne - Aldren Thorne, apparently - why they should be getting the job, Jarek looked up the ship on his datapad. It wasn't a model he was familiar with, which wasn't really a surprise. He'd started Army and then had been seconded to Intelligence, with minimal involvement in the Navy. Ships had just been something that transported him from objective to objective. Now, however, he was potentially looking at a long haul and wanted an idea of what he could be getting into.

Thorne had described the ship as hauling heavy and flying ugly, and that fit. It looked like the base model had designed that big protrusion as a hangar, which was no doubt used for cargo instead. A decent number of cabins, assuming the space hadn't been cannibalized and housing shifted to bunks. A couple gun sets, theoretically enough to make enough of a nuisance to not be worth pirates' time. That cargo section was quite the blind spot though, and if it was still modular then it was doubtful much had been done to alleviate that. Wandering Star...wallowing duck. He wondered what had become of the crew before them...it looked like Aldren was the only one present for what originally had been intended as a crew of ten.

The Alliance was gone. Sure, a couple resistance groups had sprung up, or the High Republic was out there. Something seemed off though, so when the last mission had been completed the squad had a discussion. They'd decided on merc squad and had a few successful deployments. Then the realities of life had caught up with them. One had been killed and a second lamed due to unmaintained armor. A third had lost his self-control, murdered someone in cold blood, and been caught by the authorities. A fourth had just vanished one night, presumably walking away from it all. The crew hadn't been known enough for anyone to want to sign on, so the rest had gone their own ways.

Jarek had found his way to Ord Mantell, where there was supposed to be work aplenty. It'd been more expensive than anticipated though, and he wasn't quite ready to become a killer for hire. This posting had come about, and here he was.

Several of the others had started introducing themselves. A mechanic, a so-called fixer, the purported muscle. No pilot yet, though theoretically Aldren would be able to fly the ship. Ana - the mechanic hopeful - claimed not to be a shooter, but he got the impression that the others who'd spoken up were capable. Ex-military possibly, much like him. There were a few others in the hangar that fit that description too. And some general lowlifes hoping for a cheap ride away. No surprise there.

"Jarek. Not afraid of hard work and I can be invisible when you need me to. Plus I can back-fill or supplement any role on this ship."

The man's short presentation was calm and confident. His voice wasn't the smooth of a con artist, not the overtness of a braggart or drunkard. His posture was vaguely military, just like the others he'd noted...he hadn't been able to get rid of that yet. He wore civilian clothing, but it was functionally tailored to allow full range of motion and probably not snag on anything. The blaster pistol in his drop-leg holster was clean and functional, but also showed the wear that indicated it was for use, not for show. Judging by the reactions of a couple people near him, they hadn't really noticed his presence. Now they did, and they subtly edged away.

 

Aldren Thorne did not mind silence.

He trusted it more than talk.

Talk was cheap on stations like Bonadan. It came easy, wrapped in charm or swagger or desperation, sold by the mouthful in cantinas and docking bays by people who needed credits, passage, or one more lie believed. Silence was harder. Silence showed him what words tried to hide. Who watched exits. Who studied the ship. Who measured the other applicants like future crewmates or future threats. Who got restless when attention was not theirs.

Bay 47 had gone quiet enough for that.

Not truly quiet, of course. Bonadan Shipyards never gave anyone that luxury. There was always the distant groan of docking clamps, the hiss of vented steam, the muted scream of a loader somewhere deeper in the station, metal grinding against metal like the whole ring was held together by bad tempers and old welds. But inside the little circle cast by the Wandering Star's floodlights, the gathered strangers had settled into something close enough.

And Aldren watched.

The mechanic—Ana Rix—had the right sort of eyes for a ship. Not sentimental. Not impressed. Listening eyes. The kind that tracked load distribution, engine vibration, and the subtle complaints of old systems that had outlived their manuals. Useful, if she was half as good as she sounded. More useful still if she talked less than most mechanics he had known.

The woman beside the loud one was a different read. Myri Dara had the polish of somebody who knew how to move through rooms she did not belong in and still come out owing nothing. Not a spacer by instinct. Not muscle either. Something more slippery. A broker. A handler. A woman who solved the sort of problems that started before blasters were drawn. Aldren had seen the type before. Sometimes they were worth their weight in fuel. Sometimes they sold you twice before breakfast.

Then there was the loud one.

Ami.

He had not needed long to place her. Not the specifics, but the category. Impatient. Aggressive. Used to getting through life by leaning into the shape of her own force. The sort who called a man "Cyclops" before she knew whether he laughed at that sort of thing or shot over it. Crude. Provocative. Probably dangerous in a straight line. Probably expensive in every other direction.

Still, there was honesty in her, and honesty had value.

The last one hadn't said much yet. The man with the datapad. Jarek. Standing back, reading more than speaking, weighing the Wandering Star the same way a soldier might assess a bunker before deciding whether to sleep in it. Aldren knew that habit too. The measuring. The contingency work happening behind the eyes. Not a drifter, then. Or not born one.

Good.

The ship loomed behind him, all scarred plating and hard angles, her hull still warm from cycling power through systems old enough to complain about it. The Wandering Star had never cared for first impressions. She was not pretty. She was not welcoming. She was a ship that endured. The kind of vessel that stayed alive because everyone aboard either learned discipline or got left behind.

Aldren preferred it that way.

Ami's complaint still hung in the bay air, sharp and juvenile.

Can we start the mission or not?

His jaw set, though only slightly. No outward flare of temper. No visible irritation. Men who lived long enough in his line of work learned not to gift their reactions to strangers. But behind the stillness, his opinion of her shifted into firmer shape. Not dismissed. Not yet. Just marked.

Too eager to test boundaries. Too comfortable mistaking patience for weakness.

That could be corrected.

His golden right eye moved from one face to the next, then settled nowhere in particular, as if the whole group had become a single problem to be assessed at once. When he finally spoke, his voice came low and level, rough with age and disuse, carrying no farther than it needed to.

"Mission."

He let the word sit there between them, dry as old dust.

"That what you think this is?"


His gaze cut to Ami first. Not heated. Just direct enough to make it plain he had heard every syllable and dismissed none of it.

"There is no mission. Not yet." He shifted his weight a fraction, boots planted firm on the stained deck plating. "There's a captain with a ship. There's work to be done. And there's a collection of strangers deciding whether they're worth the air they'll use aboard her."

Only then did he look to Ana.

"You heard a phase drift from the deck." Not praise. Not disbelief. Just acknowledgement. "Either you know your business, or you know how to sound like you do."

Aldren angled his chin faintly toward the ramp behind him.

"Either one earns you a closer look. If you're right, you'll have work before we clear the lane."

His attention slid to Myri next, taking in her posture, the easy confidence, the careful way she had revealed almost nothing while pretending to answer plainly.

"A fixer." His expression did not change. "Convenient title. Means anything from quartermaster to blackmailer depending on who's saying it."

A beat.

"But if you can grease wheels without getting my crew arrested, robbed, or sold, then you may be more useful than half the blasters on this station."

Then Jarek, quiet and observant with his datapad.

"And you." Aldren's voice stayed calm. "Either say your piece or keep studying my hull until you find religion in the weld lines. Makes no difference to me. But if you're the cautious type, understand this now—she looks rough because she's lived. Not because she's dying."

At that, he turned just enough to cast a glance back at the Wandering Star, and something in his posture changed. Not softened. Never that. But steadied in a way that made plain the ship was the one thing here that was truly his.

"She'll hold."

The words were simple. Absolute.

Then he faced them again.

"Ami." He gave her name no more heat than the others. "You want credits, you start by learning the difference between urgency and stupidity. One keeps a crew moving. The other gets people spaced."

No raised voice. No threat dressed up for show. Just a hard fact, set down between them like a tool on a workbench.

"If I ask for introductions, it's because I want to know what I'm bringing aboard before I bet my ship on it. You don't like that, there are a dozen captains on this station stupid enough to hire on attitude alone. Find one."

The hangar seemed to narrow around the words. The hum of the Wandering Star filled the gap after them, steady and low.

Aldren folded his arms across his chest, the scar over his right eye catching the floodlight for half a second as he looked over the group again.

"Here's how this goes," he said. "You answer plain. You board if I say you board. Then we talk terms, bunks, and what needs doing before departure. That simple."

His gaze flicked once more across each of them in turn.

"None of you know each other. That can be an advantage if you're smart. Means no old grudges, no bad habits carried over from somebody else's command, no inherited loyalties I need to pry apart. Right now you're all just candidates in my bay."

Another pause.

"Whether you become crew depends on what happens in the next few minutes."

He lowered his arms.

"Now." His voice stayed even. "If anyone else is done performing, we can continue like adults."

Aldren said nothing after that.

He didn't need to.

He simply stood at the foot of the ramp beneath the hard white lights of Bay 47, old freighter at his back, station stink in the air, and waited to see which of them understood that joining a crew was not about swagger, wit, or volume.

It was about whether they knew when to speak—

and when to shut up.
Myri Dara Myri Dara Jarek Harbolt Jarek Harbolt Amiggie Lutih Amiggie Lutih Ana Rix Ana Rix
 
Ana didn't speak when the others did. She hadn't when Myri introduced herself, hadn't reacted to Ami's impatience, and she hadn't looked up when Jarek gave his piece. Not because she wasn't listening, but because she was. Listening to the ship.

The low hum behind Aldren's words, the uneven rhythm buried under the steady output, the way one system lagged just a fraction behind another, as if it were compensating for something it hadn't quite fixed yet.

When Aldren addressed her, her attention shifted. Not quickly. Not sharply. Just enough. Her eyes moved from the hull to him, steady and unreadable, like she was deciding whether answering was worth the energy.

"Both." The word came quietly, even, without any attempt to dress it up. "Knowing and sounding like it tend to overlap if you're doing it right."

No challenge in it. No ego either.

Her gaze flicked briefly toward the ship again, tracking something along the upper plating, then down toward the deck where the vibration fed back through the structure.

"Phase drift's minor," she added, almost as an afterthought. "But it's not random. Something's compensating for something else that hasn't been fixed."

A small pause.

"It'll hold," she echoed his earlier sentiment, though her tone made it clear she meant it differently. "Just not efficiently."

She didn't elaborate. Didn't offer solutions. Not yet. That wasn't the point. Her attention returned to him fully now, not defensive, not trying to impress. Just…present.

"If you want it corrected before departure," she said, voice still low and level, "I can do that."

Nothing more. No pitch. No promise. Just a statement.

Then she went quiet again, as if the conversation had already moved past the part she needed to be involved in.

Aldren Thorne Aldren Thorne Jarek Harbolt Jarek Harbolt Amiggie Lutih Amiggie Lutih Myri Dara Myri Dara
 


Objective: Take a job
Location: Bay 47, Bonadan Shipyards, Ord Mantell
Outfit: "Criminal" Casual
Tag: Amiggie Lutih Amiggie Lutih | Aldren Thorne Aldren Thorne | Ana Rix Ana Rix | Jarek Harbolt Jarek Harbolt

Myri didn't look up at first when the newest arrival stepped into their orbit—she felt him instead. A shift in presence. Measured. Observant. Her gaze followed a second later, dark eyes settling briefly on the man as he approached. Jarek didn't carry himself like the others. Not loud like Ami. Not openly curious like the rest. There was a quiet sort of assessment in the way he moved, like he was already deciding what everyone here was worth.

Myri respected that. She said nothing to him yet—just a small, acknowledging tilt of her head before her attention drifted back to the group.

Right in time for Ami to, predictably, make everything worse with another crazy nickname. Myri exhaled softly through her nose as another nickname hit the air, her expression flattening just a fraction. "Of course," she muttered under her breath.

Then, louder—just enough for the potential captain to hear—her voice carried with a calm, almost apologetic steadiness. "We actually do know each other.." A beat. "I'm sorry in advance. But I promise she actually is more useful than she is annoying." There was no real heat behind it. Just quiet honesty. Her gaze flicked briefly toward Ami, watching the way she occupied space like a detonation waiting for a reason. Then back to the presumed captain.

"I'll do what I can to keep her… contained." A slight pause, as if she were considering the word choice. "…or at least pointed in a useful direction." It was the closest thing to humor she offered, dry and nearly invisible.

Movement at the edge of her awareness drew her attention—Ana. Myri's eyes lingered a fraction longer this time. Not on her face. On her hands. Her stance. The way she held herself in stillness. Not decoration. Not noise. Capability.

Myri filed that away without a word, her expression unchanged as she shifted her weight slightly, settling into a quieter position within the group. Watching. Listening. Waiting to see what was going to happen next.
 
Jarek grinned somewhat at the comment about the weld lines.

"It'd take a more imaginative holy man to than me to piece together that religion. I've shipped in worse."

That the worse ships had mostly been tailored to simply look that way wasn't really relevant. At least a couple of them had legitimately been worrisome too...one time the team had slept in shifts and kept discrete breathing gear with them at all times. On a friendly vessel. There had been some quiet discussions with the captain of that one come disembarkation.

The man almost raised an eyebrow at the request for more information. In fairness though, his first response had been pretty vague.

"That's fair. If you need an emergency pilot or copilot, if you need a crewmate kept alive until they reach a medcenter, if the mechanic needs help by someone who knows the difference between laser calipers and a hydrospanner, I can do that. If you want a word for it, call me a floater. My specialties, however, are getting into places quietly and violence. Send me in advance of a risky delivery meet to have a trump card up your sleeve"

More than he'd wanted to say, especially in a mixed-company crowd. Just like before though, his tone was matter-of-fact. This wasn't bragging, wasn't bluster. He also wasn't ashamed of it and wasn't on the run with cause to keep his voice low enough to be covered by the apparently off-phase engine harmonics.

If this didn't work out he'd have to find a different job, and being too well-known would make it difficult to get into some places. Or local law enforcement might decided to 'keep an eye on' him if they had informants present. As it happened, the amount of his personal weapons exceeded the station average to a degree that said law enforcement officers might worry, if they knew about all of them. Which they didn't. A Twi'lek next to him grinned at the violence part and nudged the guy standing next to him. Maybe that person was a better judge of ability, but he just responded with a tight warning shake of his head and avoided looking at Jarek.

It was a bit confusing that Aldren had reiterated that none of them knew each other. Sure, that appeared to be the case for many, but for one the fixer - Myri - had clearly stated something about her and the woman next to her being a group deal. She was honest though, reiterating that the two of them did actually know each other. Probably well since she also suggested that she could influence her actions. He wondered what other role she'd play on-ship; fixer was critical in shifty and some not-so-shifty endeavors, but from what he understood 'independent traders' like this generally needed everyone to contribute on both sides of the flight. At the end of the day though that was the captain's responsibility.

 

Aldren let the silence settle again after Jarek finished.

Not because he needed time to think.

Because silence did half the work for him.

People had a habit of filling it when they were nervous. Talking too much. Offering too much. Showing him the edges they usually tried to hide. This little collection was no different, though each of them did it in their own way. The mechanic listened to the ship more than the people. The fixer measured the room like she was already calculating angles and exits. Her loud companion pushed against every boundary she saw just to hear what sound it made when it bent. And the quiet one—Jarek—had finally stopped circling his answer and put something useful on the table.

Pilot when needed. Medic in a pinch. Hands useful enough not to get lost in an engine compartment. Quiet entry. Violence when required.

That was better.

That was something a captain could use.

Aldren's golden eye moved across them one by one, unreadable as ever. The floodlights overhead caught the old scar crossing it for half a second before he shifted.

"Better," he said at last, his voice low and rough. "Now you sound like people applying for work instead of drifting through a cantina argument."

No smile came with it, but neither did the earlier edge.

His gaze settled first on Ana.

"You hear a problem in my ship and offer to fix it before I've even hired you." A beat. "That's either confidence or compulsion. I can work with both."

Then to Jarek.

"Floater's a useless title," he said flatly. "But the skillset isn't." His chin tilted a fraction. "Pilot, field medic, quiet work, and enough mechanical sense not to lose a hand in engineering. That makes you adaptable. Adaptable earns longer consideration than charming."

His attention shifted to Myri.

"You brought the loud one and admitted it before I had to drag it out of you. That counts for something." A pause. "And if you can keep her pointed in a useful direction, that may count for more."

Only then did he look to Ami.

For a moment, he said nothing at all.

That probably landed harder than a snap response would have.

"You like credits," Aldren said finally. "Good. Means you understand the point of the exercise." His tone stayed even, almost dry. "You want to start making them, first learn when to stop talking long enough to hear the job."

He let that sit.

Then he turned slightly, glancing back up the lowered ramp into the dim industrial belly of the Wandering Star. The ship answered with her usual low hum, one subsystem lagging a fraction behind the others in a way only a trained ear would bother noticing. He noticed it now because Ana had named it. That, more than her words, earned her a mark in the right column.

When he faced them again, the decision had already been made.

"Here's what happens next," he said. "You come aboard. We walk. You see the ship. I see how you move in her. Then we talk terms."

His gaze hardened just a shade.

"That is not the same as all of you being hired."

Aldren started up the ramp, then stopped after only two steps and looked back over one shoulder.

"If that disappoints anyone, the station concourse is still full of captains with worse judgment and lower standards."

A faint beat.

"They're usually the ones who die first."

With that, he continued a few more steps up onto the ramp, boots ringing dull against the metal.

"The mechanic comes with me to engineering first," he said without turning. "I want to hear what she thinks is actually causing the drift before I decide whether she's as good as she sounds."

Then, after a brief pause:

"The rest of you follow. Quietly, if you can manage it."

The last part was aimed at Ami without needing to name her.

At the top of the ramp, Aldren stopped again and cast a final look down into Bay 47—at the harsh station lights, the stained deck plating, the cargo loaders sitting cold and still, and the group of strangers who might soon become crew.

Or trouble.

Usually both.

"Welcome aboard the Wandering Star," he said, voice carrying back into the hangar. "Try not to embarrass yourselves in the first five minutes."
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Ana didn't respond immediately when her name was singled out, largely because she had already been listening to the ship rather than the people. The low hum beneath the ambient noise had shifted just slightly as Aldren turned toward the ramp, revealing an imbalance threading through the systems. It was the kind of flaw that functioned just well enough to pass unnoticed by those not paying attention, but now that she knew it was there, it stood out to her like a misaligned line in otherwise clean code.

She followed him up the ramp with a measured pace, neither hurried nor hesitant. "It's not a single failure point," she said, her voice calm and pitched just high enough to reach him without effort. "If it was, you'd hear a clean stutter instead of this specific lag."

As she stepped onto the metal, her boots made less noise than most, her attention already shifting inward toward the structural integrity of the vessel. "Something's compensating for something else," she continued, her tone more thoughtful than performative as she diagnosed the sound. "It's likely a power routing issue or a timing desync, perhaps a subsystem that was patched when it should have been replaced."

She crossed further into the Wandering Star, her hand brushing lightly along the interior bulkhead to feel the vibrations directly through her skin. "It holds," she added, echoing his earlier assessment while adding her own clinical nuance, "just not cleanly."

Ana didn't look back at the others or acknowledge the invitation as anything more than it was: a job that needed doing. Her focus narrowed onto the internal systems she had yet to see, and she offered a final, simple directive. "Show me engineering."

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Objective: Take a job
Location: Bay 47, Bonadan Shipyards, Ord Mantell
Outfit: ”Criminal” Casual
Tag: Amiggie Lutih Amiggie Lutih | Aldren Thorne Aldren Thorne | Ana Rix Ana Rix | Jarek Harbolt Jarek Harbolt

Myri let the captain’s words settle without arguing them, which in itself was probably the clearest sign she was willing to take him seriously.

That dry little edge in his voice, the one that promised standards rather than comfort, earned the faintest shift in her expression. Not quite approval. Not quite amusement. But close enough to both that it softened the line of her mouth as she glanced toward the lowered ramp.

“Fair enough, Captain,” she said evenly, accepting the terms without trying to negotiate around them. “A walk-through before promises. That seems almost responsible.”

Her gaze slipped briefly toward Jarek then, measuring him again now that he had finally spoken plainly. The caution in him had shape now. Usefulness too. Not the kind that needed to be advertised twice. Myri gave him a small nod, subtle as breath, before her attention drifted on.

Ami, of course, remained Ami. Myri exhaled softly through her nose as if already bracing for whatever nickname would come next. “I meant what I said before,” she added, glancing back to Aldren as she started toward the ramp. “I know her. I’ll do my best to keep her in line.” A beat passed, and then the faintest trace of humor touched her voice. “Or at least redirect the damage.”

She stepped aboard with measured ease, one hand trailing lightly along the inside of the entry as her eyes moved over the ship’s interior. Not openly appraising in the way Ana had done, but absorbing details all the same. Age. Wear. The sort of practical neglect that said the vessel had survived by necessity rather than polish.

Ana disappeared mentally into the ship almost at once. Myri noticed that too—the immediacy of it, the certainty, the way her attention locked onto the Wandering Star’s inner workings like the rest of them had already become background noise. Useful, Myri thought, saying none of it aloud.

Then she looked back over her shoulder toward Ami and Jarek. “Well,” she said, her tone dry, “if we’re being welcomed aboard and judged at the same time, we may as well continue inside.”

Her eyes flicked further down the corridor, speculative now. “Maybe start with the galley. It tends to tell you everything you need to know about a ship.”

Another glance toward Ami. “And I sincerely hope there’s a lock on the alcohol,” she added, deadpan. “Otherwise she’ll drink it all in one night and blame the captain’s hospitality for it.”
 
Aldren was right...floater was a useless title. Then again though, so was 'fixer'. Plus, floater had a couple additional connotations - especially in space - that were both childishly amusing and potentially accurate if something went wrong.

The man selected a few of them, both by gaze and by words. What he said for each person was neutral, barely edging on positive if the magnifying lenses were strong enough. But they were through the first hurdle...he took them on board the ship. Terms were yet to be discussed, true, yet not everyone had made it this far. That point was reiterated when he flatly stated that it didn't mean they were hired. That was the way of things though: there were always multiple stages to being hired or promoted. Myri's nod - bare as it was - wasn't missed, but it registered too late for him to reasonably react.

Their first stop was to be engineering so Ana could demonstrate her skills, and the rest of them were to follow quietly. If his bearing hadn't screamed authority - military or strict law enforcement maybe - that would have cinched it. The way that he moved suggested training, someone who knew how to handle himself in a fight. Given enough time Jarek might be able to pin down more specifics, should he care to. Or he could check the holonet if the curiosity got too much.

As they entered the vessel, Ana's focus visibly narrowed and she began analyzing out loud. She finished with a command to show her engineering. Jarek thought that bold, personally, or maybe she just wasn't thinking about it. So far there weren't any specifics called out though, just educated guesses, so he stayed quiet. This was too early in diagnostics for his limited knowledge to be of any real help. Instead, he examined the interior of the ship similarly to how he'd examined the exterior.

Visually, the ship appeared clean without being spotless. Worn in places, sure, but maintained well enough to probably avoid accidents caused by material fatigue or leaks. It didn't have a shine that suggested the captain spent his free time scrubbing the visible surfaces with a small brush; that could have indicated a mental issue or fixation on appearances over reality. It wasn't entirely utilitarian either...plenty of spaces where customization could be fit in. With just a glance he could also see that the ship itself wasn't really designed with defense in mind. Such wasn't really a surprise in a civilian vessel, defenses were typically an afterthought that were fit in where they could fit.

In short, just about as advertised. A point in Thorne's favor, for just as he was judging them, they should be judging him. Signing onto a ship like this had consequences one way or the other; if the captain could be trusted with something like this it suggested he might be trustworthy in other areas where it mattered.


 

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