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Approved Starship Treebrary Class Corvette MK 1

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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Intent: App the second Tree Ship created by Viridian.
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Canon Link: N/A
Permissions: N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Viridian
Affiliation: Kuxirra Tano-Bonteri Kuxirra Tano-Bonteri , Closed Market.
Model: Treebrary
Production: Semi Unique
Material: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Brylark_tree Hull
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Heavy Corvette
Length: 200 meters
Width: 70 meters
Height: 40 meters
Armament: Low
Organic Turbo Lasers
Yorik Coral Cannons
Tractor beams

Defenses: High
Hangar Space: Average
Hangar Allocations: N/A
Starfighters: N/A

Single Craft Hangar: (Does this ship have a hanger for a single fighter craft to be docked? Please choose either Yes or No. This field does not need to be taken into account when balancing but should be included in the strengths and weaknesses.) Yes

Support Craft: Average
Maneuverability Rating: Low
Speed Rating: Low
Hyperdrive Class: Average | 2.0
STANDARD FEATURES
Standard Communications Array
Standard Deflector Shield Generator
Standard Hyperdrive
Standard Ion Engines
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Repulsorlift Engines
Standard Sensor Array
Can Enter Atmosphere and Land
Holonet Access
ADVANCED SYSTEMS

N/A



STRENGTHS

Easy to Pilot
Adapts to some environments
Reinforced Armor
Bigger on the Inside: Like the Star Piercer, it's bigger on the inside. In this case, 8 3 story houses.
Symbiotic Relationship with Owner: The ship seems to have a symbiotic relationship with it's owner, growing them fruits that will provide them a complete nutritional value. It's also got an easy time picking up on their desires.

Special Hangar: One of the ships of the Treebrary Class Corvette has room for the Star Piercer to be put in it, should it be needed.



WEAKNESSES


Tree Killing Substances: Substances that can kill trees would be able to easily kill the StarPiercer.
The Dark Side of the Force: The Dark Side of the Force could make the tree very ill.
Negative Emotions: Negative Emotions such as hate, anger, etc, could make the Star Piercer sick.
Nutrients: It needs massive amounts of nutrients in order to keep it going.
Solar Energy: It needs massive amounts of Solar Energy to fuel it as well.
Clean Water: It needs clean water to fuel it.
Train of Thought: Distracting the train of thought that the user has will ruin the use of the ship.
Force Nullification: As the ship is partly fueled by the Force, Force Nullification would ruin it.
Light Weapons: The ship only has light weapons.
Death of the Pilot: Killing the owner of the tree ship will kill the ship.




DESCRIPTION

The Treebrary Corvette was the first corvette to be created by Viridian using his knowledge of alchemy, and Veldorian organic technology. This ship was made to provide a more secure means of transit than the Star Piercer was capable of. However, unlike the Star Piercer the Treebrary is in fact slower moving because of the fact that it has reinforced armoring on it, compared to the ships of others. Like the Star Piercer, there is not a single bit of metal used in the construction of the ship in the slightest. This was made by him for Kuxirra Tano-Bonteri Kuxirra Tano-Bonteri as a thank you for not using her Quarterstaff to make him ill by whacking him with it. He then made more of them to market.
 
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Viridian , with the understanding that this is using the Force to get that unusually large interior and for fueling purposes, this would appear to be an example of alchemy, which we typically restrict to semi-unique status.

The solar energy cannons should probably have their own Factory tech submission, since most people will not understand that that is. While I can understand that this solar power harnessed for offensive purposes by your explanation, it doesn't actually tell me a whole lot about the weapon's performance.
 
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Production: Semi Unique (30)

We don't use hard numbers with productions any more, but "30" looks too high to be semi-unique. Remember, semi-unique is defined as "A single small unit, squad, or squadron". I'd recommend simply deleting the hard number, or reduce it something like "12" (the number of ships found in a typical squadron).

Hangar Allocations: N/A
Starfighters: N/A
Support Craft: Two Escape Shuttles.

I admit that I read this wrong at first, in part because the starship template has recently changed for corvettes and frigates. A hangar space of "average" for a ship this size gives it one squadron. This means that the the Support Craft section shouldn't say "Two Escape Shuttles", but rather "1 squadron". That may be 2 shuttles or it may be less or more than that depending on the ship chosen.

This section has also been added to the corvette template recently. Please add it:
  • Single Craft Hangar: (Does this ship have a hanger for a single fighter craft to be docked? Please choose either Yes or No. This field does not need to be taken into account when balancing but should be included in the strengths and weaknesses.)
 
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