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Private Training to take on the stars

Laphisto

High Commander of the Lilaste Order
The Commando Program under the oversight of Trace Xyston Trace Xyston had exceeded every expectation. What began as a focused initiative to hone elite strike teams had grown into something far more significant an emblem of unity and shared purpose. Its success was undeniable, so much so that expansion became the natural next step. On the counsel of Diarch Rellik Diarch Rellik , the program opened its doors wider, taking on not only Lilaste Order recruits but also carefully selected soldiers of the Diarchy who met the rigorous standards demanded of commandos.

This was no mere recruitment drive. It was an experiment, one aimed at dissolving the invisible line that still separated the Lilaste Order from the everyday ranks of Diarchy personnel. For all their discipline and effectiveness, the Order bore a distinct identity an aura, a way of carrying themselves that set them apart. Their culture, their philosophy, and their code of conduct gave them an air of otherness that, while respected, also reinforced their separation from the Diarchy's regular military.

The inclusion of Diarchy soldiers in this next wave of commandos was designed to change that. These new operatives would serve as the first generation to straddle both traditions, trained in the unique balance of the Lilaste Order while still bearing the stamp of the Diarchy's martial heritage. They would become proof of concept—embodiments of integration rather than mere collaboration. This was, in many ways, a trial. But it was also a deliberate step forward: a vision of a future where the Diarchy and the Lilaste Order stood not as allies of circumstance, but as a single, interwoven strength. The commandos would be the crucible, and their success would set the tone for what was to come.

To most, Kiev'ara was nothing more than another exploited rock a barren mining world bled dry for its veins of crystal and ore. Its lifeless surface and unforgiving climate offered little reason to suspect otherwise. Ships came and went, drills carved deeper into its crust, and in the ledgers of galactic industry, Kiev'ara was a simple entry: a dead world made profitable. But beneath that façade lay a truth known only to a chosen few the Diarchs, Laphisto, and a handful of trusted figures within high command. For them, Kiev'ara was no ordinary planet. It was the staging ground for something far greater, a secret born not of resource hunger but of pure ambition.

Hidden within the Rift of the Abyss, where the oppressive weight of the void crushed even the faintest echo of the Force, a facility had been constructed in silence. Here, in the deepest wound of the planet, the air was thick with a suffocating stillness, an emptiness that cloaked all presence. It was the perfect veil, an environment where no Jedi or Sith could pry, no seer could glimpse. In that hollow silence, the facility thrived unseen untouched by spies, prophets, or even the Force itself.

The first wave of recruits had scarcely been given a few hours to settle before the summons came. Lined up with precision, they were marched in silence deeper into the hidden facility, their escorts none other than the grim veterans of the first Commando batch. Their destination was a vast chamber carved into the bedrock, its ceiling lost in shadow, its walls humming faintly with the oppressive silence of the void.

At the heart of the room stood a sight both imposing and surreal. A great alcove jutted toward the chamber's center, its end suspended just above the raw stone surface of Kiev'ara itself. Upon it stood a figure unlike any other a towering, dragon-like Figure who wore Lialste armor some would know him as the High commander himself . His feet never touched the exposed planet's surface, a deliberate separation that carried a weight few could yet understand.

Around the chamber's edges, Lilaste Order personnel stood watch. Many bore the distinctive hilts of lightsabers at their hips, their silent presence a reminder of power and judgment. One by one, recruits were directed forward, compelled to descend the steps that brought them closer to the planet's naked surface. The moment each set foot upon the stone, the reaction was immediate. Breath caught in their throats. Hands clawed at temples or pressed to chests. Some staggered, some fell to their knees, overcome by a pressure they could not name, as though an unseen hand had wrenched something vital from within them.

Those who collapsed outright were swiftly seized by the commandos and hauled away escorted, dragged, removed without ceremony. But those who endured, who forced themselves across the bare ground toward the figure in the center, met a fate far more profound. Those who managed to endure the walk were brought face to face with the figure at the chamber's center. Towering, draconic, and immovable, he extended one clawed hand and pressed it firmly upon each recruit's head. The effect was immediate and agonizing.

Screams tore through the chamber, echoing against the stone. Recruits clawed at his wrist in desperation, their bodies convulsing under the unseen pressure. The Force-sensitives stationed around the edges did not intervene. Instead, they observed in silence, eyes sharp and hands scribbling notes onto datapads, their attention clinical, detached.

Then came the final horror. From the recruit's mouth and eyes seeped wisps of smoke thin at first, then streaming in greater torrents, twisting together in shades of ashen grey, pale blue, or deep crimson red. Each hue reflected something unseen yet intimately known: the soul's tether to the Force, torn free at its root. When the last thread unraveled, the body crumpled to the ground empty, severed. The dragon-like figure inhaled, and the smoke drifted inexorably into him, absorbed into himseld.

Around them, silence lingered heavy. Those who survived the walk, who made it to this point, did not emerge unchanged. They were hollowed, stripped of something eternal, and reshaped into something else entirely. and the pain the person felt while first steping onto the planets surface was gone. annd they were escorted away, annd the process continnued. onnne by one

Callista Sharde Callista Sharde
 
Callista knew very little of what awaited her on this barren rock, but she was determined to see it through.

It had been some time since the assault on Verrinox, she'd had time to recover from her injuries and bring herself back up to the standards of the Diarchy's military. She had, during her recovery, gone through the process of transfer from planetary militia to the Diarchy's Regular Army. From there she had immediately begun working her way up as speedily as possible. Meeting and Exceeding requirements to advance into higher echelons of the Diarchy's military. From generic infantry, to a Ranger Battalion, from Legionary to Optio, now she was gunning for Centurion. She was eager to prove herself, eager to improve, and eager to become strong.

Verrinox had scarred her, and not just physically. That day when she was knee deep in the mud and the muck and the blood, when she'd faced that monster. It left her in a cold sweat every time she woke up. It had shown her just how truly weak she was, how utterly helpless she was against such naked power. She had no power of her own, and it sickened her to know that she was so utterly ancillary. She had been little more than a toy for Darth Virelia Darth Virelia when she fought her on Verrinox, little more than amusement for the beast that batted her about like a ball of yarn, amused by her prey's struggle before quashing it so completely and making Callista painfully aware of her own inferiority.

It had infuriated her. And that fury became her drive. She swore an oath to herself, that she would rid herself of her weakness and become strong. That she would go to war with the woman in the mirror, and carve out every last failure from herself no matter how painful it might be. Anything less than absolute victory, was unacceptable.

And now she found herself here. Kiev'ara. A barren planet that had been thoroughly stripped of its beauty and resources. A place that was as depressing and boring as it could get. Nothing of interest, barely a footnote in any records anywhere. Hardly anyone knew it existed, and those that did either didn't care, or knew the secrets it held and liked to keep them secret. She'd been thrown into a ship with a few dozen other candidates, they sat shoulder to shoulder in total silence for a number of horus, awaiting whatever training was to come next. Many of them were already well renowned, Rangers, Scouts, Heroes and otherwise highly decorated for valor and staunchness in the face of the enemy. All of them thought they were prepared for whatever was to come, none of them were right. They were brought onto the planet, they were unloaded in silence, and forced to march in formation in silence to their ultimate destination deep beneath the planet's surface. None of them got to see what was outside the facility, they saw only what their escort allowed them to see, barren hallways.

Until finally they came to a dead end with a single narrow door flanked by guards carrying lightsabers. The door was opened, and they filed out by file from left to right, and descended into the pit where they would be destroyed, and rebuilt. Callista swallowed the nervous lump in her throat, she made no mistake, she knew that this was a furnace that she was stepping into. So that she, the raw material, may be forged into a weapon worth using. This was where Callista would die, and be born again into someone new, someone strong.

Someone worthy.

She began to descend behind the man in front of her, and the woman behind her fell in after her. They began going down, and soon enough the pain started. Callista felt... empty... void... soulless. There was a pain in her chest that grew with each step, but nonetheless she pressed onward. The pain she felt reminded her of the pain inflicted on her by that monster, that day on Verrinox when she had been laid low, the pain, shame and weakness that the day had branded into her memory was all she needed to press on. Pain wracked her body as she continued on, and she heard a thud as the woman behind her fell over screaming, she refused to stop though. She stumbled, she dropped to a hand once, but she never let herself stop moving forward. The pain was temporary, the pain would make her strong, she knew this, and she abhorred her own weakness too much to stop.

Eventually, with her chest heaving from the effort of pushing through the pain, she reached the draconic creature at the center of the chamber, and awaited her turn. Soon she would be baptized, annointed by a power beyond her. It would be agonizing, but through that agony she would ascend to become something more. If she had to sacrifice her soul, that she might defeat the evil she had witnessed that day...

Then so be it.

She whispered to herself final words of resolute determination before stepping forward to receive sanctification. Her head was seized, and the torment began. She screamed, like all the others she screamed, but she fought the urge to pull away. Her toes curled, her muscles tightened, her fists clenched, and her body shook, but she did not offer any sort of resistance. This was what she wanted, this was a gift that she had desired for a long time, and she wouldn't reject it now. The wisps of smoke that left her were of an angry red-amber color, like fire. The process was harrowing, but eventually it ended, and her stubbornness kept her standing a brief moment after it ended. Her shaky knees gave out a moment after, leaving her kneeling on the ground a moment to recover. She was close to blacking out, but she fought to stay awake as long as possible.

The feeling of profound emptiness was what she remembered last before she succumbed to the ordeal.

Laphisto Laphisto , Diarch Rellik Diarch Rellik
 

Laphisto

High Commander of the Lilaste Order
A gauntleted hand clamped around her arm and hauled her upright with the ease of a man lifting dead weight. The motion was rough, efficient, stripped of even the pretense of gentleness. For a heartbeat the commando's faceplate lingered close, visor locking with her eyes. There was no pity there, no rebuke, no approval only the cold, measuring look of one who had endured the same crucible and recognized its mark upon another.

Then he released her and moved on, already seizing the next recruit with the same brutal detachment. The silence between them spoke louder than any accolade. It was not dismissal. It was recognition the unspoken acknowledgment of one survivor to another. She had been emptied, stripped bare, and yet she still stood. That alone had earned her a place among them.

Around her, the chamber had become a gallery of extremes. Some recruits trembled but remained upright, pale and drenched in sweat, their eyes still alight with the stubborn fire of survival. Others knelt doubled over, clutching their chests or retching against the stone, broken but still clinging to life. And scattered between them were the motionless sprawled where they had fallen, their faces locked in masks of pain and terror.

Commandos moved among the fallen with mechanical precision, lifting the lifeless as one might carry shattered steel from a forge. They were not cast aside, but borne away in silence, their sacrifice to be remembered with honor.

The air itself was heavy, saturated with the aftermath. Screams still seemed to echo against the walls, mingling with the acrid tang of ozone and the sharp stench of sweat. Every breath carried the memory of suffering. Callista had survived, one among the few who endured. And as she watched the commandos sort the living from the dead with merciless efficiency, the truth settled on her like a weight: this had not been a ritual. It had been a trial one meant to break them, and to prove who was worthy of being reforged.

When the figure at the center finally lowered his hand and turned, the ceremony was complete. The chamber shifted into motion. Survivors were pulled into rough lines, herded toward a passage that led deeper into the abyss. Behind them, the broken and the fallen were lifted with deliberate care. Some still twitched, their eyes glazed; others were lifeless, bodies stiffened where they had collapsed. None were discarded. Even failure here carried honor, and preparations for their burial began at once.

The dragon-like figure stepped forward, his shadow stretching long across the stone. His voice filled the chamber his hands clasped behind his back as he spoke

"You have given up what none would dare. You have surrendered the tether that bound you to all life your voices in the Force are silenced forever. You chose this sacrifice, and in doing so, you have placed yourselves apart from all others. The dead who could not endure will be remembered, but it is you who endure now, hollowed of the Force and made ready for the forge." His gaze swept over the line of survivors, cold and appraising, yet edged with a gravity that carried almost reverence.

"You will be broken again. Beaten, starved, and ground until nothing of weakness remains. But from that void, you will rise as more than soldiers. You will be the answer to power unchecked. When you leave this place, you will carry the strength to meet any who wield the Force Jedi, Sith, even myself and strike them down."

He let the words hang in the oppressive silence of the chamber, the final echo a vow etched into the stone itself. Then, with a flick of his hand, the commandos drove the survivors onward, deeper into the abyss. They left behind the screams and smoke of the ceremony, carrying with them only emptiness, silence, and the certainty that nothing would ever be the same again.

Callista Sharde Callista Sharde
 
Callista had not considered that this ordeal might be fatal. Nonetheless she found herself oddly unmoved by the now dead neophytes, and surprisingly she herself was not shaken by the thought that this might have killed her too. She was, considering the circumstances, unreasonably calm.

She was hoisted to her feet by a firm grip around her arm, and she compliantly stood up. The weakness in her legs left over from her severance from the Force slowly fading away, letting her stand up straight on her own soon after she had been lifted. She was then released, and she made her way to where the others who had passed were collected, and waited there for further instruction as the rest did.

She and her fellow recruits watched as the remainder of their group went through the process. Over half of them collapsing lifeless, leaving altogether only a third of the original group once all was done. After that the survivors were approached by the draconic man who had drained them, and he addressed them.

Callista listened carefully to every word, but the part that had her attention the most was when he told them that they would be striking down those who can touch the force. That thought brought her back to that day, that feeling of utter powerlessness that had haunted her ever since. The bitter frustration at her own weakness had refused to leave her alone. And now she was going to shed that weakness.

She didn’t care that she would be destroyed, that she as a person would cease to be, and be made into something altogether different. As long as it made her strong, as long as it gave her the strength she needed to destroy monsters like that.

Callista did not need much motivating from the commandos who oversaw them. She was moving in the indicated direction the moment it was indicated, she was eager to begin.

Laphisto Laphisto
 
The room was an echo chamber of sound, amplifying the horror and pain in the voices of the recruits as the High Commander wrenched the Force from them. Bodies crumpled and thudded to the planet's surface, kicking up dust that danced sadistically in the air. Trace stood against the wall of the room, watching the proceeds with a detached gaze. His eyes drifted up to the shadows covering the higher parts of the room. Was there even a ceiling? The darkness looked more and more like an endless abyss, where sounds of terror echoed for eternity. His scream was up there somewhere, albeit months farther along its journey than these.

He brought his eyes back to the floor as another recruit stepped forward. Unlike the others, though, when she touched the planet's surface, she kept going. He could see the enormous effort it took to drag one foot in front of the other, and yet she never stopped. Not until she reached Laphisto's feet. When the dragon's hand pressed into her forehead, she screamed like the others. And yet her hands didn't fly up to swat at the High Commander's wrist, or try to pry herself away. Despite the agony she was going through, she was eager. That was commando material. Trace made a mental note to remember her as she collapsed. She was a fighter. The commando to his right moved towards her, hauling her up and to the side for the initiation to continue.

When the ceremony was complete, over half of the initial recruits had perished, unable to bear the intensity of the Force leaving them. It wasn't ideal, but it was a risk they chose to take, and a sacrifice they chose to make. Laphisto cleared his throat and addressed the surviving recruits; a powerful speech, as usual.

And then they were off, heading deeper into the facility. Trace took up the rear as they entered a tunnel seemingly devoid of all light. The only sounds to be heard were the heavy and uneven footfalls of exhausted candidates, and the barely audible hum of the facility. The ambience came to an end after a half a minute when Trace spoke without preamble.

"The old self is dead, so cast him aside. Put on your new self, along with your new purpose, and you will be transformed by the renewal of your mind into the perfect warrior. Whoever you were before, whoever friends and family knew you as, they were wrenched from your body and mind just like the Force was. So just like the Force died to you, the old man must as well."

Callista Sharde Callista Sharde Laphisto Laphisto
 
Callista marched onward through her weakness, her exhaustion doing nothing to slow her down as she forced herself to take one step after another. The descent further into this pit was long and arduous, but she knew that the destination was worth it. There was no fear or apprehension in her, no hesitation or doubt. She wanted this, she wanted this badly, to the point of obsession.

Her weakness on that day was unacceptable, disgraceful and repulsive. She loathed that she could do nothing, and now she was going to be made strong enough to overcome that insurmountable foe. Whatever torturous training awaited her here, whatever challenges she would face she was ready for.

And when Trace Xyston Trace Xyston spoke, telling them that Whoever they were before needed to die, Callista could only think. The Callista that I was died on Verrinox. The Callista I am now is more than prepared to be reshaped. Let’s get started, my weakness won’t banish itself.

She was ready, at least mentally, for what was to come. The force was lost to her and many emotions of hers had been dulled. But the sense of disgust at herself had remained sharp and ever present, as had her hatred for the Sith that had laid her low. She had all the motivation she needed, and that was all she had. She’d cast aside her life already.

She would finish this training, she would become better and better. She was determined to be the best that there was even. And then she would find that woman, that thing, and she would smite it with extreme prejudice.

But first she had training to see to.

Trace Xyston Trace Xyston
 

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