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Approved Vehicle {- Torr B-Series -} 'Hornett' Speeder Bike

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Out of Character Information

Intent: To provide Torr Industries and it's customers with a speeder bike for faster travel.
Image Source(s): Credited under Images.
Canon Link: N/A
Restricted Information: N/A
Primary Sources: N/A

Production Information

Manufacturer: Torr Industries
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Torr Industries
Modularity: No.
Production: Limited
Material:
Reinforced Durasteel Frame
Titanium Hull
Speeder Components
Electrical Components

Technical Specifications

Classification: Speeder Bike
Role: Scouting/Reconnaissance
Size:
3m Length
0.5m Width
2m Height
Weight: 160kg
Minimum Crew: 1
Optimal Crew: 1
Propulsion: Repulsorlift
Speed: Very Fast 600 km/h
Maneuverability: High
Armaments: Very Low
2x Micro-Laser Cannon
Defences: Low
Reinforced Durasteel Frame
Titanium Hull
Squadron Count: 10
Passenger Capacity: 1
Cargo Capacity: 6kg

Special Features

- EMP Resistance, Faraday Cage
- Inbuilt Communications System

Strengths

EMP Resistance: Due to the Faraday cage that is installed within the electronics of the 'Hornett', it is resistant to Electro Magnetic Pulses.
Very Fast: As with all speeders - due to their design and purpose - the 'Hornett' is very fast and can get away from difficult situations quite easily.
Maneuverability: Due to it's design, the 'Hornett' is not only extremely fast, but also quite Maneuverable.

Weaknesses

Weak Armouring: Torr Mechanical Designs and Schematics designed the 'Hornett' to be cheap and light in order for it to be fast and maneuverable. Due to this, it has little to no armour at all.
Little Armaments: Due to their not really being a need for them, the 'Hornett' has very little armaments.
Steep Inclines: Due to it's speed, the 'Hornett' struggles to go up steep inclines as the nose will hit the hill before it can even maneuver itself to allow for an incline.

Description

The 'Hornett' speeder bike was designed by Torr Mechanical Designs and Schematics as their first vehicle that can cross great distances in mere minutes. It is currently used by both the company itself and it's customers when needed. Not much is unique or original about the bike, other than it's unconventional shape, so it doesn't particularly appeal to the masses. Nonetheless - the 'Hornett' is a cheap, reliable speeder bike useful for most situations.

Although the 'Hornett' has it's perks, such as it's resistance to EMPs and speed, it also has it's limitations. Some of these limitations include it's limited armouring and ability to defend itself. Alongside it's limited defence - it also has it's limited offence. All of this combined makes the 'Hornett' useful solely in non-combat situations and only has basic combat capabilities.
 

Netherworld

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Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.
 

Netherworld

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[member="Darren Torran"]

Nothing wrong per se, but you have a small discrepancy in the sub.



Darren Torran said:
Speed: Very Fast 280 km/h
  • For a speeder, that's not even Average speed:

    Raziel said:
    Speed: Average: 400 km/h
  • Contrast this with Very High:

    Raziel said:
    Speed: Very Fast: 600 km/h
Up your speed to 500 km/h, please.

Beef up the Description a bit as well, and we should be golden.
 
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Speed: Very Fast 600 km/h
Speed fixed.
Although the 'Hornett' has it's perks, such as it's resistance to EMPs and speed, it also has it's limitations. Some of these limitations include it's limited armouring and ability to defend itself. Alongside it's limited defence - it also has it's limited offence. All of this combined makes the 'Hornett' useful solely in non-combat situations and only has basic combat capabilities.
Bulked up the description with another - short - paragraph.

Hope all of this is to your satisfaction. Thanks for the review!

[member="Netherworld"]
 
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