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Tigmana Soldier Droids v-1.0

Oozak

Some Random Trandoshan
Tigmana Soldier Droids
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[SIZE=18.6667px]Image Source:[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=18.6667px]Intent:[/SIZE]​
[SIZE=13.3333px]To help the First Order fight the Resistance.[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=18.6667px]Development Thread:[/SIZE]​
N/A

[SIZE=18.6667px]Manufacturer: [/SIZE]​
Anaidia Corporation - Tigmana Soldier Droid v-1.0

[SIZE=18.6667px]Affiliation:[/SIZE]​
First Order
[SIZE=18.6667px]Modularity:[/SIZE]​
Yes, but only the metal hat, arms, and legs.

[SIZE=18.6667px]Production:[/SIZE]​
Mass produced, metal, blaster-proof armor. A lot more powerful than the Separatist battle droids.

[SIZE=18.6667px]Classification:[/SIZE]​
Third Degree

[SIZE=18.6667px]Weight:[/SIZE]​
125 lbs.

[SIZE=18.6667px]Height[/SIZE]​
6 feet 1 inch

[SIZE=18.6667px]Movement:[/SIZE][SIZE=18.6667px] [/SIZE]​
Cybernetic legs

[SIZE=18.6667px]Armaments[/SIZE]​
A type of blaster without a name is melted down from leftover parts of building the droids. These blasters are similar to the Jawa stun blasters, but a little less powerful.

[SIZE=18.6667px]Misc. Equipment:[/SIZE]​
Thermal detonators, DH-17 blaster pistols.

[SIZE=18.6667px]Description:[/SIZE]​
[SIZE=13.3333px]Manufactured on Alderaan, these droids are mass produced in a few hours to create an ideal mechanical army. The droids’ armor is blaster-proof, and the only way to kill one is to shoot it’s limbs or head, or with a lightsaber, the Force, or explosives. Each droid has a unique number. The droid being shown as an example is number 1893. These guys are very hard to kill if you have bad aim with a blaster. So all you Resistance troopers, good luck![/SIZE]​
 
[member="Maximo-925"]
Hello! I will be reviewing this submission.

The first thing I notice, off the top of my head, is that this excludes a field or two out of the Droid Template. Please add in any missing fields (the template will be included at the bottom of this post, but you can find the full list of the technology templates here) as you are not permitted to exclude them.



Maximo-925 said:
Manufacturer: Anaidia Corporation
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