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Approved NPC The Vanguard

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]To create a formal submission for the men who follow Atheus into battle or to perform in operations[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Image Credit: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]For Honor, Blackstone Legion Symbol[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Links: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Cerebus Enterprise, Iron Empire, Commenor, Atheus, Hellyni people, [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]GENERAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Unit Name: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]The Vanguard[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Atheus/Any faction or company he [/SIZE]affiliates[SIZE=9pt] himself with. [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Special Operations [/SIZE]Infantry, Alchemists/Scholars, Assassins/Stealth Units
  • Equipment: [SIZE=9pt]Sith Swords, Force Imbued Blades, Lightsabers *Varying designs*, AA-TKB, Iron [/SIZE]Auxiliary[SIZE=9pt] Armor *Limited usage to [/SIZE]conspirators[SIZE=9pt] of the Iron Empire*, Various armors per person's usage, [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]COMBAT INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Availability: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Unique[/SIZE]
  • Deployment: Minor
  • [SIZE=9pt]Strengths & Weaknesses: [/SIZE]
    [SIZE=9pt]​Usage of melee weaponry with Swords, and lightsabers. [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Usage of force powers of Telekinesis, Force Lightning, Force Stealth*Stealth units only*, and Alchemy/Force imbuedment*Limited to Alchemist Units*, Basic usage of the force around apprentice level.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Limited usage other than ground encounters, Stealth missions, and Alchemy creation. [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Smaller than a government Military. Ranging in 500 strong. 400 are main infantry. 70 are Alchemists/Scholars, 25 are Stealth units, and 5 are named Unique units. [/SIZE]
  • Loyal to Atheus and to others of the Vanguard.

[*]Description: After the inheritance of the Cerberus Company, Nickolas' men were now under the command of Atheus. However, many left due to having allegiances to Nick, Family, or otherwise something other than Atheus. It was with his connections to limited amounts of Hellyni people, Iron Empire soldiers and Legionnaires, and some people of Commenor, that have built up the unit once more.
With the public charging of Atheus and his demotion in the Iron Empire, some joined to support him instead of following the Emperor, and the royal family. Under the usage of Atheus, He and the other former Iron Empire soldiers taught any greenies, or newcomers in the art of warfare. Being taught by one of the best standing militaries in the galaxy, as well as from Atheus who has been around the galaxy learning of various war tactics and training regimens, Ranging from old One Sith, The Sith Empire, Mandalorian Crusaders, and even general guards of Commenor. However, rising through the ranks are five individuals who have shown the most promise with the Vanguard.

First is the Alchemist and Scholar Andria. Once a Noblewoman of Spathi on the planet Hora, She has been trained to use weapons to a fine degree, and even more so on the technologies of the force. A student that Atheus took in order to continue the creation of the Poison's oath Sith daggers, as well as the other weaponry he has created. She is leading the other Alchemists and Scholars in varying degrees of ability to continue to create weaponry for the Vanguard, and for the Warden himself.

Secondly is the Commander of the Standard infantry, Fenris. A shortened name that the man has taken in servitude of Atheus after being saved during the Omega Event. A Chiss who left the Iron Empire to be held willingly to his debt to the man. Fenris is a master strategist in military warfare, and is well versed in his own usage of ranged weaponry. While he may not be force sensitive, he does show promise to become a very valuable ally of Atheus.

Third is the Shadow of the Vanguard. Xantha. A Hellyni woman who is strong, and stout in her ways. Very nimble and quick on her feet, she specializes in the art of stealth, and assassinations. Once an orphan just like Atheus, She joined the Makrosia military as part of their intelligence. She was dishonorably discharged due to a dispute of one of her commanding officers stating that she was insane, and was a threat to the public as she was to herself. Atheus found that despite her very stoic demeanor and crude actions, she was the perfect fit for an assassin leader.

Fourth is the new recruit. Nicknamed Private as though he were in an official military, Shaun Athems is someone who has shown promise in various places within the Vanguard. Able to use the force of an apprentice level, but high ability with weaponry of all kinds, and shows promise as a leader, and even as a possible successor to Atheus should he decide to leave, or inevitably perish. Atheus has said to look out for Private. Because he could very well be the greatest member among them.

Last but not least, is Galm "Hailstorm" Halestrom. Is an old Veteran of the One Sith, and transitioned over to Commenor. He was once a soldier with the One Sith, and after their fall, went to his homeworld. Wanting to live out the rest of his life in peace, however that changed when Atheus arrived. After being placed in the Iron Empire embassy as a diplomat for the Commenor people, Atheus grew a connection to the older gentleman. A soldier at heart, and one who is not afraid to get his hands dirty. If you have a question about weaponry, or tactics or anything from the past, he is your man.

After gathering these leaders among men, Atheus gave them their titles, names, and duties that would be under himself. Each one has their own respective gear to aid them in their tasks. However, the general items given to them are used as well. These men and women follow him into battle, into strife and pain for their family, for a better life, or for the pure thrill of war. No one person is above the other. Everyone has a voice to say what they want, and everyone has a place that they can call home.
 
[member="Atheus"]



Atheus said:
Poison's Oath

Atheus said:
These weapons have their production listed as semi-unique. Poison's Oath specifically outlines PC customers only. They cannot be utilized by a unit with 400 members, so they will need to be removed.



Atheus said:
Rare, and some Unique Named units
A unit cannot be listed as both Rare and Unique. Please choose one category or the other. A Unique named unit is not the same as an individual NPC, which we have a separate template for.

From the looks of this submission, I would advise you change the classification to Unique.
 
[member="Feeto Chivaro"],

Thank you for your quick response to my submission, and for judging it.

Edited to Unique as recommended.

I thought that since I had five specific listed NPC's of the group that they could use Semi-unique items since both subs are of my creation. However, if that is not the case, then that is fine. I went ahead and removed them anyways. Thank you for catching that.
 
[member="Atheus"]

If you would like to give the named five those weapons for roleplay purposes, you can, but they can't be listed as part of this unit due to their production constraints. I would recommend making individual NPC forms for the five of them if you would like to officially codify their access to semi-unique weaponry.



Atheus said:
Unique Units

If you could change this to "five individuals" or something to that effect, this will be ready for approval.
 
[member="Feeto Chivaro"],

No They are notable within the Vanguard themselves, but aren't companion NPC matieral. If they show up in a RP, it will be for purposes of the Vanguard. So its okay.

To keep it to form because of this, I went ahead and got rid of any information about "Unique Units" other than that the vanguard themselves as a whole are unique. Is this acceptable?
 
I would support Feeto's suggestion of submitting separate individual NPC submissions for each of the leaders you have listed in here. They seem to be prominent enough and hold enough sway that having individual subs for people to reference would be useful.

Approved.
 
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