The Rouge Shadow

[Wes Jorel]

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Affiliation: Personal
Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards
Model: Marauder Class
Modularity: No
Production: Mass-Produced.
Material: Titanium
Classification: Personal Transport

Length: Marauder Class Corvette: 195 meters

Width: Marauder Class Corvette: 131 meters)

Height: Marauder Class Corvette: 22 meters

Armament: Eight double turbo lasers and three tractor beam projectors. 5

Hangar: 3 fighters

Special Features: Ion Shields
Maneuverability Rating: 2
Speed Rating: 3
Hyperdrive Class: 2
Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
Weaknesses: Has a small crew

Description: When an ion shield is in effect, it creates a bubble (figuratively speaking) around the ship to protect it. There is not much cargo capacity, There are about four sleeping quarters for passengers. There is a specific area to keep the ship's food supply.
Development Thread: There is no development thread.
Intent: Personal Transport
Who Can Use This: (Optional. If you chose Limited, Semi-Unique, or Unique in Productivity above please list what groups/characters can use this submission in role-plays.)

 

[Allyson Locke]

Is this complete? If not please complete it within 8 hours or it will be archived. Work in progress and incomplete submissions are not allowed.


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[Wes Jorel]

I'd say it's complete. The only thing I didn't fill out was that optional space. If there's anything that you think I need to improve on please let me know.

 

[Allyson Locke]

[member="Wes Jorel"]

This needs a lot of work.

• Mass-production of a personal ship doesn't usually happen (where would you keep them all)
• Mass-production is usually for companies or factions (major)
• The description is very lacking and needs to be at least a paragraph
• You need strengths and weaknesses
• You need to list what the ship has on it (armaments and non weapon supplies)

I'll leave this up for you to copy and paste to a word document then I'll be putting it into archives. Its a work in progress. I'll give you an example of a really clean submission thread for you to check out if you need some sort of guidance for the formatting of the submission

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42472-the-bullet-time/?hl=transport


If you have any questions don't be afraid to post in the factory discussion thread. By the end of today this will be ARCHIVED