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Greetings Chaos!
I'm reaching out to you all because I have been thinking over the past couple of hours of bringing back a character of mine, that belongs to a very particular race that is very close to my heart.
That is, the Resu.
They have gone through significant development over the last two years, but I'm not entirely sure if their submission is even really readable. After all, this was produced by a fourteen/fifteen version of me, and then update approximately a year ago to accommodate new events to the species.
The species was probably pretty confusing to begin with, but has most likely progressed to a point where it comes REALLY CONFUSING.
If would like people to read through it, and brutally critique it. Especially on the organization of information, and particular areas where a lack of sufficient clarity is present, as well as any place that can be simplified or ejected entirely from the submission. I want to clean this up, and dress it up pretty.
Then I'll update it again
(P.S. The title is actually a lie, the Resu are the second submission by 17 minutes, where the first submission was their homeworld, The Realm of Resu.)
I'm reaching out to you all because I have been thinking over the past couple of hours of bringing back a character of mine, that belongs to a very particular race that is very close to my heart.
That is, the Resu.
They have gone through significant development over the last two years, but I'm not entirely sure if their submission is even really readable. After all, this was produced by a fourteen/fifteen version of me, and then update approximately a year ago to accommodate new events to the species.
The species was probably pretty confusing to begin with, but has most likely progressed to a point where it comes REALLY CONFUSING.
If would like people to read through it, and brutally critique it. Especially on the organization of information, and particular areas where a lack of sufficient clarity is present, as well as any place that can be simplified or ejected entirely from the submission. I want to clean this up, and dress it up pretty.
Then I'll update it again
(P.S. The title is actually a lie, the Resu are the second submission by 17 minutes, where the first submission was their homeworld, The Realm of Resu.)