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[todo390]

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Affiliation: Personal
Manufacturer: Techno Union
Model: N/A
Modularity: No
Production: Semi-Unique
Material: Durasteel
Classification: Personal Transport
Length: 153 Meters
Width: 30 Meters
Height: 19 Meters
Armament: 1 dorsal laser canon turret (6), 2 nose laser canons (4)
Hangar: VCX-Series Auxiliary Starfighter (2)
Special Features: Deflector shields
Maneuverability Rating: 10
Speed Rating: 7
Hyperdrive Class: 5
Strengths: Turning radius
Weaknesses: Lack of strong weaponry
Crew: Pilot droid, 2 security droids
Intent: I would like to have a ship
Who Can Use This: Bounty Hunters, Droids, Techno Union Members

 

[Gir Quee]

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Gir Quee]

First off, welcome to Star Wars Chaos, [member="Todo390"]. I hope that you enjoy your time with us. Hopefully I can help you with that here.

Affiliation: Personal
Production: Semi-Unique
Intent: I would like to have a ship
Who Can Use This: Bounty Hunters, Droids, Techno Union Members

Is this going to be a single ship for your character's use and his friends? Or group of ships for several people in the Techno Union?


I'd recommend changing your hyperdrive from "5" to either Class 1 or Class 2. Class 5 would be exceptionally slow, unless that's intentional.

1 dorsal laser canon turret (6), 2 nose laser canons (4)

Is this the same as 6 single laser cannons in dorsal turrets and 4 double-barreled laser cannons in the ship's nose? Or is it something else?

Strengths: Turning radius

I'd recommend moving your maneuverability up to 7 to match this, or alternatively come up with a different strength.


Lastly, could you give us a brief paragragh giving us a summary about your design? You could include things like design details, the design's history, what it's going to be doing in the future, etc.

 

[Cira]

[member="Todo390"]

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