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The Nuvazi

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Name: Nuvazi (The Bequeath)
Designation: Sentient
Homeworld: Nuvaz
Language: Nuvazian
Average Lifespan: 300 Standard Years
Estimated Population: Planetary

Average height of adults: 5'9 ft

Average length of adults: (N/A)

Skin color: orange/brown/tan

Hair color: No hair. Although if a Nuvazian is bred with another species with hair, their offspring would most lokely inheret the trait.

Distinctions: Jagged edged crevaces curving fluently around the cranium, knees, elbows, and torso.

Breathes: Basic Atmospheric Abilities

Strengths:
* Extremely tough and course exterior skin able to withstand more damage than the average species.
* Genetically compatible with any race, making them the only species in the galaxy known to do so.

Weaknesses: Lacking in:
* An official army
* Experience in war
* Small language barrier. Speaks small amount of Basic.

Races: Single/Unified

Diet: Edible consumption of Nuvazian fruits, vegetables, and livestock.

Common Communication: small knowledge of speaking Basic.

Culture: The Nuvaz try constricting their geneology to themselves alone to avoid unecessary connections to the rest of the galaxy.

Technology Level: Relatively low. Continually collecting the galaxies' widespread and standard equipment, and reverse engineering concepts to create unique, low level new technology.

General Behaviors: Peaceful

History: Only rumors have ever been heard about The Bequeath. A rare species of being that is compatible geneologically with every other sentient species in the known galaxy.


Intentions: To completely avoid the 'Star Wars', iscolate themselves, avoid inter-species crossbreeding, avoid any unecessary contact with the outside world, and live out their days in peace.
 
[member="Antano Bonazzo"]


Alright, nearly every aspect of your submission needs work but with a little effort we should be on our way. I'm going to make it easier and we'll start from the top on down, going piece by piece with each post.


Name: Nuvazi (The Bequeath)
Designation: Sentient
Homeworld: Nuvaz
Language: Nuvazian
Average Lifespan: 300 Standard Years
Estimated Population: Planetary

  • Please link the planet of Nuvaz so folks can find it easier.



Average height of adults: 5'9 ft
Average length of adults: (N/A)

Skin color: orange/brown/tan

Hair color: No hair. Although if a Nuvazian is bred with another species with hair, their offspring would most lokely inheret the trait.

Distinctions: Jagged edged crevaces curving fluently around the cranium, knees, elbows, and torso.

Breathes: Basic Atmospheric Abilities


  • 5'9" in height is for both males and females of the species? If so, include that, if not then include what females and males would look like in terms of height.
  • Clean up the typos in Hair Color please.
  • Clean up the typos in distinctions please. Also please expand this area and give an idea of what your species looks like.
  • Breathes : If they breathe standard air, you can put "Type I Environment"


Alright, thats enough for now and we'll go from there.
 
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