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Approved Tech The Mark X-42 Aka BloodMore

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To design and produce a war droid
  • Image Source: Pintrest
  • Canon Link: n/a
  • Restricted Missions: n/a
  • Primary Source: Personal creation

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Xanatos Bloodstone
  • Model: The Mark X-42
  • Production: Semi-Unique
  • Affiliation: Closed-Market
  • Modularity: No
  • Material: Quadanium steel and Durasteel

Weapons.
  • Cluster Bomb built into its chest
  • E-60R Auto loader missile launcher's
  • Long Retractable Pulse Blasters
  • Miniature auto loader concussion missile cannons
  • PLX-2M portable auto loader missile launchers
  • Wrist-mounted grenade launchers

TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: Class IV (Battle Droid}
  • Weight: 1 Metric ton
  • Height: 7 meters
  • Movement: Bipedal

Armaments:
  • His left Arm consists of three E-60R Auto loader missile launcher's refitted and forged into a singular arm covered in Quadanium steel and Durasteel, they fire seven rockets each in a single blast creating a arc of twenty one rockets, there main purpose is Anti-armor and they can keep a solid range lock for about 800-1000 yards depending on the terrain.
  • The droid is designed with a close defense weapon to draw on its own energy supply and extend two large rods from its chest about one foot in length each, these rods spark for a moment and then hum as the pulse flows threw them. Then the rods unleash a pulse arc in the form of a pulse beam wave that blasts off fifty fast rounds in the matter of minutes Optimum: 10-20 meter kill range at Maximum anything beyond that between 30-50 meters it will create a stun pulse wave to immobilize to bring down targets for crowd control and riots usually with no possibility to kill.Anything beyond 50 meters and the weapon is useless.
  • Deflector shield generator
  • Ray shielding
  • The center of this droids right hand can open up and expose the barrels of two miniature auto loader concussion missile cannons hidden inside the structure of his right arm.The concussion missiles have warheads that release clouds of high velocity proton particles upon impact, this weapon has a range of at least 1 miles and a blast radius of 200 yards on impact.This Droid can only hold six rounds in his arm.
  • Attached to his shoulders are two PLX-2M portable auto loader missile launcher's that have the ability to fold in and retract into the droids shoulders. Model PLX-2M they weigh 50 kg and have a Capacity 6 Arakyd 3X3 missiles with a 4.5-meter blast radius Range Optimum: up to 75 meters -Maximum: up to 750 meters.
  • Attached to his left and right wrist he has been equipped with a Wrist-mounted grenade launcher. The wrist mounted grenade launcher is very light at only 5kg with a capacity of five grenades each. This Droids currently equipped with thermal and cryo grenades.The range of fire is 600 yards.
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Force Tracking Scanner built In the optic processor that can locate any traces of Midi-chlorians.The Scanner is limited and the Droid may identify the presence of the force but not accurately determine the exact position up to a 60 feet radius.
  • One of the special features of this droids design is a CL-3 anti star fighter cluster bomb that was installed just under the armor plate in the droids chest.
  • In the worst case scenario this bomb could be remotely exploded and destroy not only the droid but also the cluster bomb consisted of explosives that detonated an initial blast in a circular arc followed by a cloud of magnetized grenades and shrapnel.The blast yield could expand well beyond 100 meters and is particularly lethal against small star ships , heavy tanks and it definitely worked for anti personal and incinerating large crowds.
  • The droid has a Repulsor lift engine and once the Repulsor lift engine is activated this heavy droid could cruise across the terrain with a max speed of 50 -Mph.The repulsor coil used a radioactive outburst to excite the electrons on the ground, disrupting the polarized magnetics thereby manipulating gravity.
  • The droid not only designed to kill but it also has two long metallic shafts that can extend from its right hand and inject a liquid of advanced synthetic biomedical chemicals called Fast Flesh directly into a injured persons wound to heal them. Then the droid can use a shield project and protect them with a ray shield while there are escorted to safety.


Strengths:
  • Deflector shield generator and ray shielding giving the heavy armored droid a great defense, making it that much harder to destroy, what it lacks in speed it makes up for in defense.
  • The droid contains large variety of weaponry in both close and long ranged combat. From attack distances of 50 feet all the way up to 1 miles.
  • The droids advanced Optic targeting system can track targets in conditions a person would consider zero visibility by using geographical scanning of the land to see threw smoke fog and bad weather, night or day and track the target.
  • The droid has been implanted with a experimental Artificial intellect combat chip, that was made possible by the technological advances of Doctor Gubacher of the Galactic Republic who was an artificial intelligence specialist about 800 years ago.

Weaknesses:
  • This droid requires a massive power supply to function properly, it is currently being powered by the fifty power cells and they are being recharged by ten fusion furnaces.
  • The Mark X-42 droid is un-naturally heavy and clunky making it rather slow as it is restricted to a maximum speed of 20 Mph on the ground and 30-50 Mph in a burst dash mode.
  • Because of the droids size and weight any attempts at stealth are impossible.
  • If they droids is blown up the explosion from the cluster bomb will indiscriminately, kill friend and foe and have a very high chance of killing massive amounts of friendly personal as well as enemies.
  • The ray shield does have some obvious weaknesses one or two well throw (emp) electro magnetic pulse grenades would completely disable the shield.

DESCRIPTION:
  • The Mark X-42 Is designed to be a battle ready suicide droid that will turn the tides of war in any fight. As there is a cluster bomb inside the droids chest any worries of the enemy capturing your droid are no longer a problem, one flick of a remote and the bomb detonates destroying your droid and perhaps the entire enemy,it is fail a safe feature.
  • All of the materials used in the construction of these droids have been sourced from some of most remote places in the galaxy, you can not exactly just acquire most of the materials used in the construction in your average space port. That being said none of the actual materials used in the construction of The Mark X-42 , have any rarity what so ever and with enough time and effort all the parts in these droids could be acquired. Due to the nature of this droid and the weapon armaments it has, we know this is the future of warfare.
  • The Mark X-42 is a expensive piece of military hardware that is why the cost and production of this prototype weapon carries a heavy price of nearly 5 million credits, but for the person willing to step and give this machine the chance to unleash its power on the fields of war they will not be disappointed. Certain parts of the The Mark X-42 had to be acquired from sources in a rather less then reputable way.

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Grand Admiral, First Order Central Command
[member="Xanatos BloodStone"]

Please hyperlink the manufacturer.

Please give this sub a once-over for formatting. You've got double-spaced paragraphs, no clear breaks between sections, no bullets, etc. As closely as possible please follow the template here.

You have Two restricted materials present on this droid, Cortosis and Stealth tech with no restricted mission thread. Merging the two is not generally allowed, and in either individual case would limit the production to either Unique (Cortosis) or Semi-Unique (Stealth). You will need to decide if you want to keep one of these and subsequently reduce the production, or keep it at limited and forgo the use of rare tech/materials.

I also don't believe that Anticoncussion Fields are capable of being fielded on something as small as a droid. Starships and buildings are one thing, but they require an immense amount of power, beyond what you can achieve in a roughly man-sized object.

Lets start with that.
 
Thanks for pointing that out I will respond to your concerns as soon as possible and correct my mistake forgive me but i looked over the restricted items list and banned tec ,i must have missed the part about the stealth field it is a one ton droid i am going too remove the stealth field. I am fixing it right now sorry again wrote it half asleep made a few mistakes
 
I cleaned it up and re-posted it changed out the metal as you requested and removed the stealth field and got rid of the Anti concussion Field, i thought with the size and weight of the droid being equal to a small fighter that the that Anti concussion Field would be ok but i took your advice and removed it, i hope i addressed all your concerns. and i could not figure out how to do the bullet point.
 
as for the manufacturer when i wrote that i was considering making a factory but i was informed if i kept the new tec limited that i would not be required to have a manufacturer, so i removed the manufacturer until the future when i decide to make a factory and company thanks for your time.
 
Grand Admiral, First Order Central Command
[member="Xanatos BloodStone"]

Alright, you've made a lot of updates and the template overall looks a lot better. I would ask if you can remove the (1) and just use the built in bullet option, that would look even nicer.

You can have your character make the droid but you still need a manufacturer. Simply linking your character profile would work. That said, given how huge and powerful these droids are, if you're solo-building them then I'd like to see production reduced to 'Semi-Unique.'

Let me see if I have all your armaments correct.

You've got a reference to a canon character, Dr Gubacher. Bear in mind Chaos is set some 800 years after the Clone Wars, so I imagine it would be hard to get anything from a presumably long-dead person.
  • Triple Rocket Launcher (Left Arm)
  • Pulse Weapon (Chest)
  • Rocket Cannon (Right Arm)
  • 2 x Concussion Missile Launchers (Shoulders)
  • 2 x Grenade Launchers (Wrists)
This thing is basically a walking missile tank, then. That's matched with the very slow speed of the droid even at a hover, so that works out. It's tough but huge, well-armed but largely with munitions. The only thing that concerns me is the lethality of the pulse weapon. Perhaps at max power it can be lethal but only at very close ranges, say 10-20 meters.
 
ok i just found the switch for the button thing i will make the corrections thank you for your time and patience kinda new to this site, my mistake on the doctor i meant to say that the technology for making the AI that the robot had came from the Dr as in the canon character made the tec to make it possible , i never meant i actually got it from him sorry i will be more clear.
 
Grand Admiral, First Order Central Command
[member="Xanatos BloodStone"]

We're almost there. I realize this has been a lengthy process and appreciate your patience.

'Strengths' should be a separate section of the template, right now it's bulleted up under 'Special Features.' Probably just got stuck up there accidentally during reformatting.

There's a small inconsistency with armament. You mention the triple rocket launcher in the right arm, then note missile cannons in both hands.Given that the right arm has no hand that seems a bit tricky. Please edit this down to just one missile canon, in the left arm.

Finally, in canon there is simply no way to get extremely accurate force-user sensors beyond using thaissen crystals at very close ranges. We have a couple pieces of Chaos-canon tech that amplify the effect but lose a lot of precision in doing so. Thaissen crystals are not a restricted material but are considered very rare. The way I see it you have a couple options.

1. Droid can positively identify a force-sensitive at a range of up to 6 feet.
2. Droid can identify the presence of a force sensitive (but not accurately determine position) out to 60 feet.

Of course you can always remove the system entirely, but that's hardly required, given the low production of this droid anyways.
 
thanks sir for your patience and time it would have been very easy for you to decline the project, thanks for helping me threw the process.
everything has been corrected , His left Arm consists of three E-60R Auto loader missile launcher's ,and his right arm has been fitted with the cannon. I corrected it the slight typos and the force thing has been fixed i agree with your thoughts on it [member="Cyrus Tregessar"]
 
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