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Approved Starship The Divinty

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To sub the stolen ship that became Ultimatum’s ‘flagship’ in the Metal Lord military
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Restricted Missions: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/107439-the-chorus-of-chaos-dominion-dom-of-mandalore-hex/(theft of the Anaxes)

Primary Source: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61953-centurion-battlecruiser/


PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer:
Original: Rendili Stardrive
Conversion: LOOM
Model:
Original: Centurion Battlecruiser
Conversion: Ulti Class

Affiliation: Ultimatum

Production: Unique

Material: Durasteel, Alusteel, Duranium, Glasteel, Bondite


TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS


Classification: Light Destroyer

Length: 1,200 m

Width: 64-382 m

Height: 292 m

Armament: High

Defenses: Moderate

Hangar: 4

Maneuverability Rating: Average

Speed Rating: Moderate

Hyperdrive Class: 2


SPECIAL FEATURES

Communications Array

Encryption Network
Holonet Transceiver
Standard Detention Cells
Tractor Beams x 6
Advanced Shield Generator x 1
Gravity Well Generator
Hyperwave Inertial Momentum Sustainer
Gravitic Amplitude Modulator
Inertial Compensators
Standard Targeting Systems
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Sensor Array
Escape Pods
Advanced Computer integration


Strengths:
Structural Integrity: The basic hexagonal design of the old ship has been maintained where possible across the change.

Sustained Momentum: The Hyperspace Inertial Momentum Sustainer allows the ship to stay in Hyperspace even with a Gravity Well Generator’s field of effect.
Gravity Deception: The ship still has the Gravity Well Generator allowing it to keep most ships from being able to jump to hyperspace, and to pull most ships out of it.
Automation is Key: The ship has had its standard starship computers upgraded and expanded to allow the mainframe to run the entirety of the ship, though with far less efficiency than utilizing a crew.


Weaknesses:
Power Deficiency: The Gravity Well Generator has remained a point of considerable power drain. When online the other systems are generally halved in effectiveness.

Electric Warfare: Unlike most of Ultimatum's designs, this ship is very weak to electric based weapons
Free Fire: The spherical dome that houses the Gravity Well Generator has maintained a similar level of weakness, with no additional armor and limited shielding making it a prime target for demolition.


Description:

The Centurion Battlecruiser, PLS Anaxes, served under the Mandalorians during the battle over Wayland. Ultimatum along with some allies from the Metal Lords managed to damage the defending fleet before commandeering the Anaxes and retreating from the system. Ultimatum was then given leave by the leader of the Metal Lords to turn the ship into a personal command vessel for service under the Metal Lords. With that stipulation, Ultimatum had the ship’s designs drawn up for renovation and alteration to fit his own style choices.

The ship’s main features remained, for the most part, unchanged although the weapons and hangars were decreased in order to accommodate other additions. The necessity of increasing the computer’s abilities required an incredibly large increase in computing complexity and size. There was also a large switch to ion cannons and electronic weaponry.

The internal design of the ship has remained largely unchanged, with corridors and rooms being only reshaped or removed to create more efficiency for the artificial’s preferences. The greatest change is seen in the bridge, where standard terminals for organics have been replaced by the far more efficient computer terminal inlets used by astromech droids across the galaxy. This makes access of the controls more difficult for organic beings without computer integrations or cybernetic implants, whereas it becomes more convenient for most artificial beings. This also allowed heavy consolidation opening more space on the bridge for increased communication equipment, sensor equipment, and targeting systems.
 

Travis Caalgen

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Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.
 

Travis Caalgen

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Ultimatum said:
Hangar: 8
Please halve this to 4 squadrons, given the mix of high/moderate ratings, the production rating, and the special systems; I find this acceptable.



Ultimatum said:
Disarmed: While retaining many of the weapons initially found on the battlecruiser, Ultimatum decided to in some cases to remove weapons or switch out with ionic weapons. This has left the ship weaker than its predecessor.
Given the fact that this vessel maintains a 'High' armament rating, this is not an acceptable weakness, please find another one that is if you wish, but remove this.
 
I made the changes and added the following:

Electric Warfare: Unlike most of Ultimatum's designs, this ship is very weak to electric based weapons


Is that better?
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Travis Caalgen

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Eh...If this was any other ship I would say it doesn't, but as this one has its special systems (which would in-fact be more susceptible to electronic attacks), I'll pass it.

Kudos for a sub well-writtten.
 
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