Approved Starship The Azili

[sabrina]

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Affiliation: Personal
Manufacturer: Independent Military Developers
Model: The Azili
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, transparisteel
Classification: Light Corvette
Length: 62
Width: 32
Height: 20

Armament: 5
4x Twin Turbo Lasers
3x flak cannons
2x proton torpedoes
2x twin Anti personnel heavy blaster
Defenses: 6

Hangar: none

Special Features:

• Communications Array
• Encryption Network
• Escape Pods
• Holonet Transceiver
• Standard Deflector Shield Generator
• Standard Detention Cells
• Life Support Systems
• Standard Navigational Systems
• Standard Sensor Array
• Standard Targeting Systems
• Tractor Beams

Maneuverability Rating: 7
Speed Rating: 6
Hyperdrive Class: 2
Strengths:

• Comfortable to stay in
• Reasonable hull strength for it's size

Weaknesses:

• no hangar bay
• weakish arment

Description: This was designed to be a ambassadorial ship, how ever it went missing. Then later found by Stephine Brown, who liked it.
​The ship itself was designed to keep an ambassador in comfort, and could let ambasador be in comfort between missions. They also had an advanced encryption network so he could keep his messages private. The outer hull was made little denser, to same levels of a ship line, for it size. Though arment was weaker, as this was not designed to be an aggressive ship. As the ship was defensive ship, it was given good engines to help with speed. Also to help protect the ambassador, it had two twin mounted anti personnel heavy blaster mounted to its carriage. This was so if they ambassador was attacked, when disembarking or embarking the ship could defend him.
Who Can Use This: Unique [member="Stephanie Brown"]
Primary Source:(Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)

 

[Gir Quee]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Gir Quee]

Armament: 10 4x Twin Turbo Lasers 3x flak cannons 2x proton torpedoes 2x twin Anti personnel heavy blaster Defenses: 14

Actual gun count looks good, almost pefectly fit in with the picket corvette example. With that, I'd like to see Armament and Defense ratings moved to 5 or 6, which is the standard for ships around this size.

Advanced Life Support Systems

Advanced Encryption Network

What features of these systems makes them advanced?

Who Can Use This: Unique

Is there a particular group or character that this ship is associated with?

 

[sabrina]

[member="Gir Quee"] edited

 

[Gir Quee]

Production: Durasteel, trainsteel

I think this is actually the material's section, while the typical Production content seems to be missing. What is trainsteel?

Otherwise, we're just about there.

 

[sabrina]

[member="Gir Quee"] edited, just realised I have made that error on other subs as well, and they passed.
Thanks for spotting it.

May have to sub to explain the spelling mistake :O

 

[Gir Quee]

[member="sabrina"], no worries. Basically, I just need these parts of the template in there now.

Production: (The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (Only A Handful of Characters), Limited (Only A Select Group Of NPCs/PCs), Minor (Any Character, Only Select Groups Of NPCs), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.))
Material: (What is your submission made out of? Certain materials are more resistant, or vulnerable, to certain weapons. Example: 'Durasteel.' Link: Manufacturing Compounds, Metals, Compounds)

 

[sabrina]

[member="Gir Quee"] done

 

[Gir Quee]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.