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Approved Location The Aura Nightclub and Lounge

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The Main lobby
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The Exotic Dancers Stage and Bar Area:
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The Dance Floor:
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Pool:
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Name: The Aura

Image Source: (In order:) First, Second, Third, Fourth

Intent: I am making this in order to provide a place for future roleplaying to take place and to provide more roleplaying opportunities

Classification: Nightclub

Location: Middle levels of Coruscant

Affiliation: It is owned by a very successful Rodian businessman by the name of Grosh

Description/History: Grosh, a male Rodian who had recently won the Corellian lottery, had a dream. He always wanted to create a nightclub of epic proportions. With his newfound wealth of 100 million credits, he could make this dream a reality. Grosh bought a large building in the middle levels of Coruscant for his nightclub. On the first level there is the main lobby. This is where people can meet friends for a nice relaxing drink, or head to one of the sound-proof back rooms to order an assassination. The back rooms each have security guards posted outside of them, the actual rooms consisting of a table and two chairs. If someone is killed in the back rooms, the body can be dragged out the back door, out of view of the main lobby. Use of the back rooms is controlled by Grosh. One can rent a room for a certain amount of time and use it how they would like to. There is a lift that can bring patrons to the next level, the dance floor. The lift also goes to the third level which houses the dancing stage and the pool entrance, and it can bring you to the rooftop speeder parking. Security guards are positioned throughout the club. The pool is in a half dome which comes out of the side of the building and is built to resemble the party planet of Zeltros.

Grosh NPC Submission: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/34908-grosh/
 
Hi [member="Ariel Shadowmaster"] ! I'll be your judge for this submission. First off, I like your nightclub idea and the images you provided. Gives a real good feel for what the setting will be like.


I only have two real issues with your location sub :


1) Could you expand out the sound proof backrooms more? I feel its really lacking. Who runs the backrooms? Independents? Local NPC crime guild? How is security handled in the backrooms? Is one patted down? Escorted by guards? If someone is killed in the backroom, how does the body get removed without other patrons being alerted to what is really going on? Just an overall expansion on how the seedy business side is handled.

2) Could you submit Grosh in the NPC forum and then link it back here? I think it would do well for people to get an idea of who Grosh is in regards to the nightclub. Especially if he is one of those nightclub owners who are high profile, always in their VIP lounge handling business or what not.


Tag me when you're ready.
 
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