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Approved Location Talis's "Fortress"

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Name: Talis's Fortress

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(The Dead Destroyer by Maddison Jones)
Classification: Abandoned and Destroyed Imperial Star Destroyer

Location: Hoth (Southern Hemisphere)

Affiliation: Talis Jzora

Description: It is an abandoned Star Destroyer that dates back to the Galactic civil war. It is extensively damaged and has lost all of its engines and its flight capabilities and it's guns and defense systems. The ship has been abandoned so, no Tie fighters and equipment remain on the ship. Most of the ship is offline but, Talis managed to activate one of it's generators allowing the lighting and heating of most of the hanger and the partially damaged bridge tower. The few operational rooms are really just the hanger, main control room a few bacta tanks and parts of the barracks. Despite it's extensive damage, it has managed to retain some of it's radar, medical, defensive and communication systems. The hangar is partially operational and holds enough space to store Talis's ship. These are the only two undamaged parts of the ship that remain operational. The ship also has one minor operational gun that could be used, however Talis can't operate the guns himself. The rest was sadly destroyed in the crash and rusted away due to the centuries of neglect.

History: The Imperial-I Star Destroyer was commissioned, deployed and lost in the Galactic Civil War centuries ago. It participated in the invasion of Hoth at 3 ABY however, it was hit and sent crashing down to the barren wastelands of Hoth. The Imperials would attempt to extract most of the supplies left on the ship however, the ship was in too critical of a condition to fly again. The Empire begrudgingly abandoned the Star Destroyer and some of it's remaining supplies as the war progressed. It remained mainly undisturbed throughout as it laid abandoned on Hoth forgotten. Eventually Talis would discover the site of the Star Destroyer during a duel with Darth Ferox. At first sight, Talis grew greatly impressed with the sheer power that seemed to radiate from this ship. He began to secretly dream of living and making a possible military outpost later in this area. He began to grow obsessed with this concept so, he began to work on "fixing" the ship to the best of his abilities. With Talis's lack of a home, he decided to live in the remains of the Star Destroyer and began to plan on expanding the "Fortress" to an actual fortress. For now, Talis was able to activate one of its backup generators powering part of the ship. Now, Talis mainly lives in the bridge tower and stores his Y2K ship in the hanger bay.

Intent: To give Talis a home and a "base of operations"

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I'd like to see a little more added to the history. Star Destroyers are a significant loss to any government. It should feel more significant than it currently does.

Other than that I have no problems, so just flesh it out a bit and you'll be good to go. Let me know if you've got questions or when you're done.
 
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