Approved Tech SWS Motorized Pulse Rifle

[Adenn Gra'tua]

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Intent: To provide all the Kallion clones with a reliable weapon without them having to search for one each time a new clone is woken.
Development Thread: None, they have been made for some time.
Manufacturer: Unknown.
Model: SWS.
Affiliation: Personal.
Modularity: Yes. The weapon has the ability to have certain properties enhanced like its ammo capacity (175 fully upgraded) and advanced sights attached.
Production: Unique.
Material: Iron.
Description: The SWS Motorized Pulse Rifle was originally made in 23 BBY by a unknown weapon manufacture that had agreed to make multiple weapons specially for the Kallion clones, the company shut down after they had produced all the weapons in by 22 BBY, which were quickly stored with all the Kallion clones for them to take whenever they were woken up. The weapon has a secondary fire mode where all three barrels bend outward to fire in a 360 degree radius around the weapon. It can also overheat if the user continuously fires the it for short periods of time (seven seconds), if overheated the user has to vent the weapon by opening the chamber that holds the pulse rounds to let the heat out.


Classification: Pulse cannon.
Size: Handheld.
Status: Illegal.
Length: 1.0160 Meters.
Weight: 5 Kilograms.
Ammunition Type: Pulse Rounds.
Ammunition Capacity: 125 Pulse Rounds.
Effective Range: 180 yards.

 

[Ashin Varanin]

@[member="Adenn Gra'tua"] - Hi there Let's get this sucker good to go.

• A pulse rifle is one of three specific canon things, all of which have advantages and disadvantages. It'd be awesome if you'd clarify which one you mean, and this would be what you would put under 'Classification.' A pulse rifle is either a pulse-blast rifle, which emits a constant hum and is inaccurate at long range, a pulse cannon, which fires highly energized plasma very quickly (in terms of both bolt speed and fire rate), and has heat problems, or a pulse rifle, which is a bit complicated. My advice would be to call this a pulse cannon, because it has the most...canon behind it.
• What you have under 'Status' is what you would put under 'Production.' 'Unique' means there's only one or two guns. For 'status,' put 'Illegal' - this thing's a beast.
• I love your list of weaknesses, but I'd remove the one about having to manually reach into a plasma gun that's just overheated. I'm sure you can find another way to deal with the heat issue.
• If you could put a note like (250 with extra-large magazine) in Ammunition Capacity to explain your comment under Modularity, that'd be great.
• This is nitpicky procedure, but if you could convert your size and weight to metric, that'd be awesome.
• Could you tell me more about the unknown manufacturer in the description?

 

[Adenn Gra'tua]

Edited. If you need me to go into more detail on the weapon manufacturer I will.

@[member="Boolon Murr"]

 

[Ashin Varanin]

@[member="Adenn Gra'tua"] - Since you've put 'unique,' your Affiliation would be 'Personal.' Wrap that up and I think we're good

 

[Adenn Gra'tua]

Done.

@[member="Boolon Murr"]

 

[Ashin Varanin]

@[member="Adenn Gra'tua"] - This is a nasty weapon; I'm glad it's unique, but it's pretty firmly canonical, and many people believe that powerful weapons are really only a problem when they start appearing in the hands of entire armies. Plus there's worse out there.

Abuse and suffer. Approved pending secondary.

 

[Lief]

Approved