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Approved Tech Sunrider Dynasty

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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Intent: To create an artifact for a legends canon master who survived for a very long time and created a dynasty family
Development Threads:
Manufacturer: Sunrider Family
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Current Caretakers [member="Morse Sunrider"], [member="Onna Sunrider"], [member="Cynna Jade Sunrider"]
Modularity: Sunrider family can modify it
Production: Unique
Material:
  • Force Crystal
  • Crystalline Lattice
  • Internal Components
Description:
Found by the jedi researchers in an ancient ship on Resu, Matsu Ike and Domino searched it finding the holocron and special key to unlocking it in the armband Nomi Sunrider wore with her robes. Inside is records and information on the ancient force dynasty that while surviving far into the empires time wasn't all recorded with the ship and holocron disappearing over three thousand years before Leia met the descendant of the Sunrider Family. The holocron contains four gatekeepers a trait common not in many except the larger grander holocrons such as the great holocron of the jedi or the neotikan's which held the personalities of several jedi.

The different members of the Sunrider family able to work and detail information about their lives and time with what was taught to them. The holocron is extremely self aware locking away knowledge that would be deemed dangerous for one to know at he time and teaching in tiers almost as most of the jedi do. With Nomi's being one of the most extensive as she was taught by several of the greatest masters within her time you go on a small journey learning from her what each one taught her over the years while she moved from one to the other refining her skills. Using the holocron, Matsu traveled with Kay a senator from the Republic through several worlds and unlocked the holocron's knowledge.

Contains:
Jev Sunrider:
  • Early history of the jedi order
  • Details being watchmen of the Darada system
Andur Sunrider:
  • Schematic of the Lightsider Explorer
  • Jedi lore and knowledge
Nomi Sunrider:
  • Details the Freedon Nadd Uprising
  • Details the Great Sith War
  • Details about Ulic and his family
  • Details on the Krath and fighting them
  • Recording of speech at Exis Station
  • Message to her family
  • Force Training:
    Battle Meditation: Master
  • Force of Will: Master
  • Battlemind: Advanced
  • Force Weapon: Beginner
  • Tapas: Beginner
  • Force Body: Advanced
  • Serenity: Beginner
  • Protection Bubble: Advanced

[*]Lightsaber Combat:
  • Djem So:
  • Niman:

Vima Sunrider:
  • Final Moments with Ulic
  • Force Powers
    Beast Taming: Master
  • Instinctive Astrogation: Beginner

Final Entry:
  • Unknown member of the Sunrider family in the ancient jedi order. Detailing the expedition to the edge of the rift and getting lost before they crashed on the moon.
Primary Source:
"This is a canon item "
 
[member="Matsu Ike"]


RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon
Starwars Chaos
  • Reviewed

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
  • Please tone this down to include only five beginner to intermediate force powers. Basic general information is fine for those of her line (general info and saber forms, etc)
  • Please remove all information and skills on those who are not of the Sunrider family. IE Nomi's Masters or any other Masters.
WITH DEV THREADS
  • Please tone this down to three master force powers and 7 beginner to intermediate. Basic general information is fine for those of her line (general basic info and saber forms, etc are okay.)
  • Please remove all information and skills on those who are not of the Sunrider family. IE Nomi's Masters or any other Masters.
  • This requires a quality 40 post dev thread for this holocron.
SUGGESTIONS
  • This is too much for a holocron. Also, your development thread isn't finished. The entirety of what actually deals with the holocron did not mention Nomi Sunrider at all, and the discovery of this holocron was less than ten posts that were not of the quality expected for a holocron of a canon Jedi. Please do it justice.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Cira"] edited as requested and going for dev thread right now. I'll message you when the thread is done to have this taken out assuming everything else is in order.
 
[member="Matsu Ike"]

Isn't that character your alt?

It has to be claimed by another writer in the list. One can make a tech sub for another writer, but ultimately, be affiliated with that person.

Please add that person as the "Current Caretaker" here under affiliation.
 
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