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Approved Tech Special Agent Des's Armor

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Intent: To provide Des with a Stealth suit
Development Thread:
The Full Reach of Law (Desmond Suffered a staggering defeat at the hands of Elliot Locke)
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A Warlords Heart
Manufacturer: Desmond
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Desmond C'artyom
Modularity: Armor may vary depending on op
Production: Unique
Material: Plastoid, Phrik, Reflec
Classification: Multi-purpose
Weight: 16kg
Quality: 10

Strenghs:
Bends light
Phrik is an extremely hard substance

Weaknesses:
Is heavy and cumbersome
Phrik plating limits agility

Special Features: Stealth technology, Shielding, Phrik



Armour Components:
  • Light bending technology
  • Sound baffling tech (Reduces noise)
  • Special polymer coating (Reflec) which stops sensor technology.
  • Compression sealed Body Glove and Breath mask (For hostile environments)
  • Energy Dispersing Surface
  • Deflector Shields
  • Reinforced Phrik
  • IFF circuitry for Identification
  • Security Resonator
  • Genetic Coding Activation
  • Magnetic Weapon Holsters
  • Magnetized boots
  • Retractable Vibro-blade
Helmet Components:
  • Range Finder
  • Multi-Frequency Target and Acquisition System (HUD, Friend/Foe Designation)
  • Self-preserving Oxygen Filters and Reserve Tank (2 hours)
  • Automatic Polarizing and Anti-Flash Blinding Lenses.
  • Holographic Vision Processors. (Thermal/Night-vision/Ultraviolet/Infrared)
  • Macrobinaculor with range of one kilometer
  • Encrypter Internal Comlink with Three-Phase Sonic Filter
  • Vocoder for audio output.
  • Audio and Video Recorders
  • Cooling and Atmospheric Temperature Control System
Utility Components:
  • Utility Belt equipped with:
  • High Tension Wire
  • Grappling Hooks
  • Spare Power Packs
  • Ion Flares
  • Energy Rations
  • Encrypted Anti-Jamming C1 Military Comm Link
  • Water Packs
  • Medpacs
  • Coded Thermal Detonator
Description:
After being captured by the Galactic Alliance Des was questioned rigorously. Upon hearing of his occupation the GA recognized his... Stealthy talents. They heard of the renowned thief and sniper and made him an offer. Join the ranks or serve life on Belsavis. He quickly chose the latter. He was indoctrinated into SIS and was outfitted with new gear. They atempted to replace his rifle, but he would have none of it. The stealth suit they provided him with though. That he gladly accepted. The already stealthy burglar was now quieter then a cat. With the suit able to bend light and managing to stop most sensor technology. The sound dampeners made the already ninja like man absolutely silent. The suit was painted black at Desmonds request. When questioned why, he merely replied so he could blend in with the shadows, but the truth was he merely thought it looked bad ass. After the suit had been gifted to Des the GA began to notice the mess hall was seemingly constantly raided by rodents. The weird thing though, they never triggered any of the traps. Sensors and cameras never caught the offending mouse..
 

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Tanomas Graf

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[member="Desmond C'artyom"]

Before we start I'm going to have to ask you to link all of the relevant posts for your phrik development from the Atrisian rebellion.
 

Tanomas Graf

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[member="Desmond C'artyom"]

If two posts is all you have then that's not enough, especially for a restricted material. Per the standardized dev thread, all dev must be at least 10 posts.
 

Tanomas Graf

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Alright, you've got the dev but you're missing the Strengths and Weaknesses.

The weight is also too light, as this is both reinforced phrik AND a deflector shield, I suggest adding a few more kilograms to compensate.
 

Tanomas Graf

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One last thing, for one of your strengths you put it as "renders invisible". With the technology you have listed, it doesn't necessarily render anybody invisible, does it? If so that might require extra development.
 
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